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心霊スポットに行く誘いを断ろう

Ghost Hunting? No Thanks!
あなたは心霊スポットに行く誘いを断っています。
肝試しは日本の夏の風物詩のひとつですが、苦手な方も多いのではないでしょうか。相手を不快にしないためにも、別の遊びを提案してもよいでしょう。
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Let's go ghost hunting this summer!
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Let's go ghost hunting this summer!

No way! I don't wanna meet ghosts. Certainly, I like horror movies, so I know curious young people such as you always are going to have a hell of a time in the movie! Therefore, why don't you come to my house and watch horror movies while eating snacks? You should learn about ghost hunting theory!

自然な表現

No way! I don't wanna meet ghosts. Certainly, I like horror movies, so I know curious young people such as you are always going to have a hell of a time in the movie! Therefore, why don't you come to my house and watch horror movies while eating snacks? You should learn about ghost hunting theory!

1. an alternative expression you can use in this context. change the word order in this manner to make the sentence more clear and to improve the fluency of the sentence.
That sounds nice. Why do you not want to go ghost hunting? A lot of people will be there and we will even have an instructor.

You are not afraid of ghosts, are you? I have gone to a famous haunted place when I was a high school student with my friends, then we heard strange sounds, they ran away left me alone! If something scary things happens there, I know you leave me anyway, so I never want to go! Instructor?? Even more scared! I'm sure that place is haunted definitely!!!!! Please invite other friends who like ghost hunting.

自然な表現

You are not afraid of ghosts, are you? I went to a famous haunted place when I was a high school student with my friends, then we heard strange sounds, they ran away and left me alone! If something scary _ happens there, I know you will leave me anyway, so I never want to go! Instructor?? Even more scared! I'm sure that place is haunted definitely!!!!! Please invite other friends who like ghost hunting.

1. consider using past tense form when describing actions or events that happened in the past.\
2. use the conjunction "and" to join two parts of a sentence, one part happening after the other part.
3. the noun "things" appears to be redundant in this context. consider removing it.
4. use the modal verb "will" when referring to what is going to happen in the future, especially things that you are certain about or things that are planned.
No, this place does not have real ghosts. It is like an animated place, and people try to catch as many fake dolls as they can. Are you sure you do not want to try this out?

That sounds nice, is it an attraction like a haunted house? Well, it seems fun, however, I heard such a place called ghosts forward...would you promise me to nothing happen scary things? What kinds of dolls we should catch? I watched the movie 'Child play' before, I've been scared of dolls ever since then.

自然な表現

That sounds nice, is it an attraction like a haunted house? Well, it seems fun, however, I heard such a place called ghosts forward...would you promise me that nothing scary happens? What kinds of dolls we should catch? I watched the movie 'Child play' before, I've been scared of dolls ever since then.

1. an alternative expression you can use in this context to make the sentence more clear and to improve the fluency of the sentence.
It really is nice. I am sure you will enjoy visiting this place. The dolls used are from different horror movies. It is like a treasure hunt. Will you be joining us?

Well, I don't know...of course I want to go with you, but I heard that place is a famous haunted place. Nevertheless, do you want to go there? If we take a picture there, we might watch ghostly images caught on camera...Actually, won't you come to my house? I have a good idea, I'll cook for you! What do you want to eat?

自然な表現

Well, I don't know...of course I want to go with you, but I heard that place is a famous haunted place. Even so, do you want to go there? If we take a picture there, we might watch ghostly images caught on camera...Actually, won't you come to my house? I have a good idea, I'll cook for you! What do you want to eat?

1. great job! here's an alternative expression you can use in this context.
Do not be afraid. There will be a group of people accompanying us as well. It will be a lot of fun. Do you mind if I invite some of the people to your house?

Sure, come to my house with your friends, but I'm afraid that I can't go with you there, after all. I decide to wait for you at my house. I'm really sorry I couldn't go even though you invited me. I am looking forward to hearing your story about ghost hunting! I wish you return safely.

自然な表現

Sure, come to my house with your friends, but I'm afraid that I can't go with you there, after all. I decide to wait for you at my house. I'm really sorry I couldn't go even though you invited me. I'm looking forward to hearing your story about ghost hunting! I wish you return safely.

1. great job! you can use the contraction "I'm" which is short for "I am".
  • haunt(出没する)
  • superstition(迷信)
  • do not want to ~(~したくない)
  • be scared of ~(~が怖い)
  • ghosts(幽霊)
  • Let's do to something else.(何か他のことをしましょう。)
  • It 's just a superstition.(それはただの迷信です。)
  • I am scared of ghosts.(幽霊が怖いです。)
  • Who else is coming with us?(他に誰が私たちと行くのですか?)
  • I do not want to go.(行きたくありません。)

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