運転手に乗り心地について伝えてみよう

Giving the impressions of the comfort of your ride
あなたは運転手に乗り心地について伝えています。
乗り心地の感想を述べてあげましょう。運転が上手だったら、褒めてあげれば運転手も喜んでくれるでしょう。
How did you enjoy the ride?
 
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How did you enjoy the ride?

It was comfortable. Thank you for your safe drive.

自然な表現

It was really comfortable. Thank you for the safe ride.

1. Just an additional expression.
2. Better word choice.
You are welcome. May I ask for some feedbacks to comply with the survey? How about the air conditioning? Is it cool enough?

It was very comfortable inside. It is not so cool and not so hot. It was quite a very nice ride. How long have you been working as a taxi driver?

自然な表現

It was very comfortable inside, not so cool and not so hot. It was quite a    ride. How long have you been working as a taxi driver?

1. and 2. Other words are redundant here.
I have been working as a driver for about 5 years now. I really enjoy my work. What kind of work do you do?

That's good to hear. I am an event organizer. I'm from Japan.

自然な表現

That's good to hear. I'm an event organizer    from Japan.

1. Use contractions in normal speech.
2. Other words are redundant here.
That's interesting. I have heard so much about Japan. I would like to visit there someday. Is this your first time visiting here?

Yes, it is. This is one of my dream countries to visit. I have wanted to come here for a long time, and at last I came here. I want to enjoy the stay here the most that I can.

自然な表現

Yes, it is. This is one of my dream countries to visit. I've wanted to come here for a long time, and at last, I'm here. I want to enjoy my stay here as much as I can.

1. Here is an alternative expression, destinations.
2. Add the possessive "my" to indicate whose stay you are talking about.
3. Better phrasing.
Okay, that's nice. How long will you be staying here? I can recommend some popular sightseeing spots for you.

Oh, that's helpful. I like visiting museums. Could you recommend some, If possible, little-known spots?

自然な表現

Oh, that'd be helpful. I like visiting museums. Could you recommend some, if possible, little-known spots?

1. This is a more polite way to phrase it.
  • enjoy(楽しむ)
  • ride(乗る)
  • comfortable(快適な)
  • sick(吐きそう)
  • nice(気持ちのいい)
  • It was comfortable.(快適でした。)
  • I feel sick now.(今、吐きそうです。)
  • It was a very nice ride.(とても気持ちのいい乗り心地でした。)
  • I think you need more practice.(もっと練習が必要だと思います。)
  • The seats and the music were great.(座席と音楽が最高でした。)

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