運転手から日本について聞かれたことに答えてみよう

Talking to the driver about Japan
あなたは運転手に日本について話しています。
運転手はあなたの国について話を聞きたがるかもしれません。旅行先と比較して日本について教えてあげましょう。
Can you tell me about Japan?
 
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Can you tell me about Japan?

There is a four seasons in Japan. Summer is recently very hot days. So I don't recommend summer seasons sightseeing. I recommend to come at spring, autumn and winter in Japan.

自然な表現

There are four seasons in Japan. Summer has recently been very hot, so I don't recommend sightseeing during the summer season. I recommend visiting in spring, autumn, and winter in Japan.

1. 'are' should be used with plural, seasons. Article is not needed with plural 'seasons'.
2. Your expression was rephrased to sound more natural and grammatically correct. Should use present perfect 'has been very hot' for past action that is related to the present. It is better to combine these two sentences into one for better flow.
3. Better wording, better to use 'visiting' in the context of tourism. Should use 'in' to indicate a season.
4. Should use comma here.
Thank you for the tips. What sightseeing sites would you recommend? Feel free to tell me about it in detail.

I recommend to visit Arashiyama in Kyoto. You can see the autumn leaves. That is beautiful. It is famous for not only japanese but foreigners.

自然な表現

I recommend visiting Arashiyama in Kyoto. You can see the autumn leaves, which are beautiful. It is famous not only among Japanese but also among foreigners.

1. gerund form is more commonly used after 'recommend'.
2. Better to make it one sentence for better flow by using 'which', should use 'are' after plural 'leaves'.
3. Better to use 'among' to refer to a group of people.
4. This was added to make it more natural and clear.
Thank you for that recommendation. I will surely put that on my bucket list. What makes it famous for foreigners? What activities can I do there?

You can do river rafting, ride the torrolly
train, see beautiful leaves. There are many nature. You can be relax.

自然な表現

You can go river rafting, ride the trolley
train, and see beautiful leaves. There is a lot of nature, so you can  relax.

1. Should use 'go' with activities, go skiing, go river rafting, etc.
2. Correct spelling.
3. Should use 'and' before the last item listed.
4. Should use 'lot of' with uncountable nouns, nature.
5. Better to make it one sentence to improve the flow.
6. 'be' is not needed.
Wow! That sounds wonderful! I wish I could go there soon. By the way, how are you enjoying your stay here so far?

What do you mean that how are you enjoying your stay here so far? Is that my trip in Arashiyama?

自然な表現

What do you mean by "how are you enjoying your stay here so far"? Are you asking about my trip to Arashiyama?

1.2. Should use 'by', quotation marks to refer to his question.
3. This is a more natural way to ask about his question.
4. Should use 'to' to indicate a location.
Oh, you are here now in my country. This is Korea. I am driving you to your hotel, right? Should we head there now?

Oh, I understood. This situation is in taxi. I confused in real and setting world.
Let's restart. I want to go Namdaemun to buy kids clothes. How long does it take there?

自然な表現

Oh, I understand. This setting is in a taxi. I got confused between the real and fictional worlds.
Let's restart. I want to go to Namdaemun to buy kids' clothes. How long does it take to get there?

1. Should use present tense, you now understand.
2. Better word choice to refer to the location of a role play.
3. Article is needed with taxi.
4. Your expression was rephrased to sound more natural.
5. 'to' is needed to indicate a location.
6. Should use possessive form.
Another expression: to shop for children's clothes.
7. This was added to ask when you will arrive there.
  • island(島)
  • earthquake(地震)
  • culture(文化)
  • season(季節)
  • variety(様々な)
  • Japan is an island.(日本は島国です。)
  • Japan has four seasons.(日本には、4つの季節があります。)
  • Earthquakes frequently occur in Japan.(日本では頻繁に地震が起こります。)
  • As for Japanese food, there are a variety of options.(日本食は、様々な種類があります。)
  • Japan is famous for its anime culture.(日本はアニメの文化で有名です。)

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