歯の症状について説明してみよう

Explaining the condition of your teeth.
あなたは自分の歯の症状について説明しています。
歯の治療をしっかりしてもらうには、正確に自分の歯の症状を伝えなければいけません。歯の調子をはっきり伝えてみましょう。
How are your teeth feeling?
 
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How are your teeth feeling?

I have had a lump as big as a pea on the right side of the upper jaw since a few days ago. I don't have any pain now, but I had some pain a week ago.

自然な表現

I have had a lump as big as a pea on the right side of my upper jaw since a few days ago. I don't have any pain now, but I had some pain a week ago.

1. It's better to explain WHO this refers to.
Early evaluation is always best, so please schedule an appointment soon. In the meantime, have you noticed any other changes, like redness, tenderness, or difficulty chewing?

I'd like to make an appointment as soon as possible. Nothing but the lump unusual happens to me. The dentist said my bite caused some problems and made mouthpieces to prevent teeth from grinding during sleep.

自然な表現

I'd like to make an appointment as soon as possible. Nothing unusual but the lump has happened to me. The dentist said my bite caused some problems and made mouthpieces to prevent my teeth from grinding during sleep.

1. UNUSUAL related to NOTHING, not the LUMP.
2, 3. You need the present perfect tense here to connect the past with the present.
4. You need to explain WHO this refers to.
Absolutely! It's wise to get the lump checked out as soon as possible. Did the dentist mention what they thought the lump might be, or if it could be related to the bite problems they mentioned?

Ah, I needed to give more information because I was distracted by traffic noises. Yes, the dentist assumed my bite problems and teeth grinding had a deep connection with a lump. Also, she said if it repeatedly happens, removing the filling and root canal treatment will be necessary. The ceramic filling was out of pocket and not covered by national healthcare insurance. I will have to pay it again for the new filling. Neither do most private insurers cover ceramic filling. I found one insurer available to cover it just now.

自然な表現

Ah, I needed to give more information because I was distracted by traffic noise. Yes, the dentist assumed my bite problems and teeth grinding had a deep connection with the lump. Also, she said if it repeatedly happens, removing the filling and root canal treatment will be necessary. The ceramic filling was expensive and not covered by national healthcare insurance. I will have to pay    again for a new filling.     Most private insurers don't cover ceramic fillings either. I found one insurer available to cover them just now.

1. Usually uncountable as a general point.
2, 5. The first time we talk about something we say ‘a’. Then we use 'the' because the other person knows what we are talking about. E.g. “I had a sandwich and a banana for lunch. The sandwich wasn’t very nice but the banana was delicious.”
3. OUT OF POCKET refers to EXPENSES which you claim back later.
4. No pronoun needed here - refers to a different future thing.
6, 7, 9. You have not mentioned them before.
8, 10. General point.

関連単語

  • toothache（歯痛）
  • bleed（血が出る）
  • come out（抜ける）
  • break（壊れる、欠ける）
  • tooth decay（虫歯）

関連フレーズ

  • I have a toothache.（歯が痛いです。）
  • My gums are bleeding.（歯茎から血が出ています。）
  • My tooth is about to come out.（歯が抜けそうです。）
  • I think I have a cavity.（私は虫歯があると思います。）
  • My tooth is chipped.（歯が欠けました。）

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