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工場の安全対策について説明しよう

Let's explain the safety measures
あなたは工場の安全対策について聞かれています。
工場でどのような安全対策をとっているのか、外部の人にも分かるように説明してみましょう。
Could you tell me what kinds of safety measures you have in this factory?
 
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Could you tell me what kinds of safety measures you have in this factory?

I'll tell you about safety measures in our factory. We care about installing properly, ventilation, maintenance, and operation of appliances. There are carbon monoxide and smoke detectors, and we test them to see if they are working once every two weeks. If they take batteries, we change them once a year. Carbon monoxide can seep from any fuel-burning appliance. Yet it can't smell or be seen even when it reaches dangerous levels. For that, detectors are necessary. Also, fire extinguishers are handy everywhere. Now I'll explain measures against strangers trying to get onto our factory.

自然な表現

I'll tell you about safety measures in our factory. We care about installing properly, ventilation, maintenance, and operation of appliances. There are carbon monoxide and smoke detectors, and we test them to see if they are working once every two weeks. If they take batteries, we change them once a year. Carbon monoxide can seep from any fuel-burning appliance. Yet it can't smell or be seen even when it reaches dangerous levels. For that, detectors are necessary. Also, fire extinguishers are handy everywhere. Now I'll explain measures against strangers trying to get into our factory.

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That all sounds very interesting so far. I'm looking forward to hearing more about the further security measures. Please continue.

We need to address potential industrial espionage threats. Visitors must show their ID at the gates, and employees who invite them must sign into our factory. In recent years, people posing as tourists have attempted to access our factory without proper authorization, including accidents. If strangers ask you to sign them into our factory to see the sights because of paying some money, employees must say no and report to security officials. If not, they threaten the security of our factory and put their careers in jeopardy,

自然な表現

We need to address potential industrial espionage threats. Visitors must show their ID at the gates, and employees who invite them must sign into our factory. In recent years, people posing as tourists have attempted to access our factory without proper authorization, including accidents. If strangers ask you to sign them into our factory to see the sights because of paying some money, employees must say no and report to security officials. If not, they threaten the security of our factory and put their careers in jeopardy,

1 - "including accidents" is grammatically correct, but it doesn't sound very clear. You could alternatively say: "including accidental trespass."
I can understand the seriousness of the problem. Are any further measures needed, in addition to showing ID and signing-in?

Visitors must wear their name tag on the right side of their upper body or chest area. Entering our property by car is prohibited. Bringing any item prohibited by law or ordinance into the property, weapons or other destructive devices, isn't permitted. Visitors need to check with administrators before taking any photos or videos. Using wireless communication devices in certain areas and photography are restricted. Non-service animals are prohibited from being brought onto the property. Visitors are allowed to access our factory between 10 a.m.-3 p.m.

自然な表現

Visitors must wear their name tag on the right side of their upper body or chest area. Entering our property by car is prohibited. Bringing any item prohibited by law or ordinance into the property, weapons, or other destructive devices, isn't permitted. Visitors need to check with administrators before taking any photos or videos. Using wireless communication devices in certain areas and photography are restricted. Non-service animals are prohibited from being brought onto the property. Visitors are allowed to access our factory between 10 a.m.-3 p.m.

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関連単語

  • safety （安全）
  • factory（工場）
  • helmet（ヘルメット）
  • fire detector （火災探知機）
  • on a weekly basis（週一回の頻度で）

関連フレーズ

  • This factory has an earthquake-resistant structure. （この工場は耐震性があります。）
  • Each worker is obligated to wear gloves and a helmet.（従業員は手袋とヘルメットの着用が義務づけられています。）
  • We check whether the fire detector is working on a weekly basis. （毎週、火災探知機の検査をしています。）
  • We clear up the passage. （通路には物を置いていません。）
  • Our factory follows the design standards for factories. （私たちの工場は、工場の設計基準に沿っています。）

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