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Excuse me, may I help you? Do you understand English?
Excuse me, may I help you? Do you understand English?
I understand. I think you are heading for Takeshiba ferry terminal, right? The ferry terminal is five minutes' walk from here. Which destination are you planning to go? There are four lines, so I'll show you around.
I understand. I think you're heading for the Takeshiba ferry terminal, right? The ferry terminal is five minutes' walk from here. Which destination are you planning to go to? There are four lines, so I'll show you around.
Unfortunately, there is nothing interesting to see on our way. However, if you have enough time to the departure, I recommend you visiting Hama Detached Palace Garden or Tokyo Tower.
Unfortunately, there's nothing interesting to see on our way. However, if you have enough time before the departure, I recommend visiting Hama Detached Palace Garden or Tokyo Tower.
I suggest Hama Detached Palace Garden if you prefer the traditional Japanese style. It has near 400 years history. But I myself prefer Tokyo Tower. It has been a symbol of Tokyo and it was the symbol of the recovery from the World War Two. As it's sunny toda, I'll see the view of whole Tokyo city very well and you could also see Mt. Fuji from the tower.
I suggest Hama Detached Palace Garden if you prefer the traditional Japanese style. It has nearly 400 years of history. Still, I myself prefer Tokyo Tower. It's been a symbol of Tokyo and its recovery from World War Two. As it's sunny today, you'll see the view of whole Tokyo very well and you could also see Mt. Fuji from the tower.
2. You need to use a preposition to connect two nouns.
3. Avoid starting sentences using the conjunction "but".
4. It is common to use contracted verb forms in everyday conversations.
5. Avoid repeating same words in single sentences if possible.
6. World War Two does not require the article.
7. This is the proper way to spell this word.
8. You are talking generally, so it is better to say "you".
9. This part is redundant as it is implied from the context.
To tell the truth, I've never been to Hama Detached Palace Garden before. As it's famous for its pond, you could enjoy seeing it.
関連単語
- be lost(道に迷った)
- direction(方向)
- problem(問題)
- stranger(その場所に不慣れな人)
- help(助ける)
関連フレーズ
- Are you lost?(道に迷ったのですか?)
- Excuse me?(すみません。)
- Can I help you?(お困りですか?)
- Could you say that again?(もう一度言っていただけますか?)
- You're welcome.(どういたしまして)
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