現在完了形を使ってみよう

The Present Perfect Tense
現在完了形を使って講師と会話してみましょう。
現在完了形は過去から現在までをつなげて表せるという表現方法です。 特に現在にフォーカスが当てられます。「have + 過去分詞」で表しましょう。 回答例のように、宿題を終わらせたばかりという臨場感が感じられます。 他にも現在完了形は「〜したことがある(経験)」、「ずっと〜している(継続)」、「だから〜だ(結果)」などの使い方ができます。 【回答例】 I have just finished my homework. ちょうど宿題を終わらせたよ
Please use the present perfect tense.
 
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Please use the present perfect tense.

I have heard the shocking news that earning a low salary may impact your brain.
A study from Columbia University has found people in the US that earned low wages over a number of years were more likely be experience faster memory declining.

自然な表現

I have heard the shocking news that earning a low salary may impact your brain.
A study from Columbia University has found that people in the US that earned low wages over a number of years were more likely be experience faster memory decline.

1. Although "that" isn't necessary here, it's better to add it to avoid confusion.
2. The noun form is preferred here.
What a significant finding that is. On the other hand, I believe that exercise, nutritious food, and an overall healthy lifestyle may alleviate the effects. What else did the article say about that?

Researchers looked at these people earned between 1992 and 2004, putting the people into three groups. Those who always earned low wages during this time, those who sometimes did and those who never did. They have meant that a person's hourly rate was lower than two-thirds of the US median wage for that year. So if the median wage was $10 per hour, they were earning less than $6.67 per hour.

自然な表現

Researchers looked at how much these people earned between 1992 and 2004, putting the people into three groups. Those who always earned low wages during this time, those who sometimes did, and those who never did. Low wages meant that a person's hourly rate was lower than two-thirds of the US median wage for that year, so if the median wage was $10 per hour, they were earning less than $6.67 per hour.

1. "looked at these people earned" is incorrect. You are talking about how much they earned, so you have to add this part.
2. You need to put a comma between each item on a list of three or more, including the last two, before the conjunction.
3. "they have meant" is incorrect. You are defining low wages according to the researchers, so you should use this here.
4. You should generally avoid starting sentences with a conjunction. Here, you should use a comma instead.
I see. Thank you for sharing this information with me. I believe you have more to share. Please continue.

This is quite concerning because, between 2004 and 2016 these people will be 63 and older, the researchers found that the low-wage group experienced faster aging of the mind. The minds of long-term low earners aged about a year faster than those who never earned low wages over 10 years.

自然な表現

This is quite concerning because, between 2004 and 2016, these people will be 63 and older. The researchers found that the low-wage group experienced faster aging of the brain. The brains of long-term low earners aged about a year faster than those who never earned low wages over 10 years.

1. You need to put this non-restrictive clause between commas.
2. These two parts aren't properly linked. To avoid a comma splice (an instance of using a comma to link two independent clauses), you should use a full stop here.
3. "mind" is a bit unnatural here. It's not entirely incorrect, but it's better to use this noun instead.
  • have + 過去分詞(〜したところだ、〜したことがある、〜している)
  • have been to(〜へ行ったことがある)
  • have never + 過去分詞(1度も〜したことがない)
  • Have you ever ~ ?(〜したことがありますか?)
  • since(〜から)
  • I have just finished my homework.(ついさっき、宿題を終わらせた。)
  • Have you ever been to America?(アメリカに行ったことはありますか?)
  • He has never played the piano.(彼はピアノを弾いたことがない。)
  • They have lived in Tokyo since 2005.(彼らは2005年から東京に住んでいる。)
  • I have not decided to see a doctor yet.(彼はまだ病院に行くことを決心していない。)

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