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There was a cat that lives outside near my home. This cat doesn't have owner but were so tamed. There was some neighbors who stroked her and so am I and my wife. On winter, days went by when we couldn't find her at the usual space.
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There was a cat that lived outside near my home. This cat didn't have an owner but was so tame. There were some neighbors who stroked her and so did my wife and I. In winter, days went by when we couldn't find her at the usual space.
One day, there was a notice putted at the usual space. It was noted that:
"I'm taking care of the sweet cat in my home to prevent from coldness during the winter."
"I have putted it here because some people asked about the cat."
We have relieved to know this worming news imaging she is living under the ceiling with the great accommodations. We living in Ueno in Tokyo where is the urban area. But it is also the old town that there was a local community, which we didn't notice. There were people who worry about the cat.
One day, there was a notice put at the usual space. It said:
"I'm taking care of the sweet cat in my home to prevent coldness during the winter."
"I have put it here because some people asked about the cat."
We were relieved to know this warming news imagining she is living under the roof with a great accommodation. We live in Ueno in Tokyo which is an urban area. But it is also the old town with a local community, which we didn't notice. There were people who worried about the cat.
2. We usually use "it said" or "it stated" here to explain what the notice said.
3. "From" is not required here.
4. The past participle of "put" is "put". It is an irregular verb.
5. We need the verb "were" (be) here with the adjective "relieved". We use the wording "Someone is + adjective".
6. Proper spelling of the word.
7. Proper spelling of the word. "imaging" doesn't fit here.
8. We usually use the word "roof" in this context instead of "ceiling".
9. We use the singular form to refer to one thing, and we use indefinite articles with nonspecific and unknown nouns.
10. "We living" (subject+verb-ing) is not used in any tense. We could use the simple present tense "we live" here.
11. 'where' doesn't fit here, we use 'where' when referring to a place or position, usually a place where something happens or exists. For example, 'That is the stadium where we play football every Saturday'. It is not commonly used as a subject in this structure, it usually refers to the object of the clause that follows after it, while 'that' and 'which' could function as subjects, so we should use 'which' in your sentence.
Consider these two sentences: 'This is the car that goes fast' - 'that' introduces the clause and refers back to the noun 'car' and also functions as the subject of the clause, 'goes' is the verb. The subject of the clause 'that' and the noun 'car' refer to the same thing.
However, this sentence is different: 'That is the place where I met my friend' - 'where' introduces the clause and refers back to the noun 'place' and it is not the subject. The subject of the clause is 'I', so the subject 'I' and the noun 'place' are different, they don't refer to the same thing.
12. We use the definite article 'the' in front of a noun or a noun phrase when we believe the listener/reader knows exactly what noun or noun phrase we are referring to. The noun phrase "urban area" was mentioned for the first time, and the text doesn't specify which particular "urban area" you're referring to, so the article 'the' is not required here. We need "an".
13. The preposition 'with' is required here. It shows possession - what the old town has.
14. You're referring to something that happened in the past, so we need the past tense here.
We've never met the person who took her in. I guess it is a local person who lives here for long time and has its own house.
Time passed and spring passed, summer came now. We have hoped to meet her again, but we couldn't. It's so hot in these days that I wish she stays in a comfortable home now.
We've never met the person who took her in. I guess it is a local person who has lived here for long time and has their own house.
Time passed and spring passed, summer has come now. We have hoped to meet her again, but we couldn't. It's so hot these days that I hope she stays in a comfortable home now.
2. We don't usually use "it/its" to refer to people. We could use "their" here.
3. The same as correction number 1.
4. "in" should not be used with "these days".
5. "wish + present simple" is not used. We use "hope" in this context. You're referring to what you hope is true.
There was a beagle dog that I had in my hometown. I want to live with pets, such as dog or birds. However it's not easy to find apartment, which keeping a pet is allowed, in Tokyo. So I had killifishes and shrimps in the small tank.
There was a beagle dog that I had in my hometown. I want to live with pets, such as dogs or birds. However, it's not easy to find an apartment, where keeping a pet is allowed, in Tokyo. So I had killifishes and shrimps in a small tank.
2. A comma is required after the introductory phrase 'However'.
3. "apartment" is a singular and countable noun, so we should use an article before it.
4. We use "where" to introduce clauses about places in which something happens.
5. We use the definite article 'the' in front of a noun or a noun phrase when we believe the listener/reader knows exactly what noun or noun phrase we are referring to. The noun phrase "small tank" was mentioned for the first time, and the text doesn't specify which particular "small tank" you're referring to, so the article 'the' is not required here. We need "a".
I don't want to settle in the same place at this moment. I hope to be transferred to a foreign branch. But I want to have a dog or cat someday.
I don't want to settle in the same place at this moment. I hope to be transferred to a foreign branch. But I want to have a dog or cat someday.
関連単語
- There is ~ （単数）.（〜がある。）
- Is there ~（単数）?（〜はありますか？）
- There are ~（複数）.（〜がある。）
- There was~（単数）.（〜がありました。）
- There were ~（複数）.（〜がありました。）
関連フレーズ
- There is a pen on the desk.（机の上にペンがあります。）
- Is there any water in the bottle?（ボトルの中に水は入っていますか？）
- There are many people in the station.（その駅の中にはたくさんの人がいます。）
- Once upon a time there was a temple here.（昔ここには寺がありました。）
- There were some boys in the park.（その公園には何人かの男の子達がいました。）
こんな方にオススメ
2. You're referring to something that happened in the past, so we need the past tense here
3. "owner" is a singular and countable noun, so we should use an article before it.
4. We must use singular verbs with singular subjects and plural verbs with plural subjects. If a subject is singular (for example, "cat"), the verb must be singular too (for example, "plays"), and if a subject is plural, the verb must be plural too (cars have; people go).
5. "Tamed" is a verb but we need an adjective. We could use "tame".
6. We must use singular verbs with singular subjects and plural verbs with plural subjects.
7. We need the past tense to talk about the past and we need the verb "did" as you're talking about something you did.
8. We usually mention other people first and then ourselves.
9. We need the preposition "in" with seasons - something happens in winter.