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志望企業に前職での実績をアピールしよう

Talking about your track record at a job interview
外資企業の面接を受けています。前職での実績をアピールするところです。
あなたの業績をリストアップしてこの質問に臨みましょう。ひとつひとつ詳しく述べるのではなく、いくつかに絞って自分の技術や能力を生かすにはどのようにしたかを実例説明しましょう。
Please tell me about your track record in this business.
 
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Please tell me about your track record in this business.

In my previous job, I prepared proposal materials for prospective foreign clients. The materials I created were stored in the cloud so that they could be diverted within the company to improve efficiency. The efficiency gains made by my work have improved our operational efficiency and were appreciated by my team members.

自然な表現

In my previous job, I prepared proposal materials for prospective foreign clients. The materials I created were stored in the cloud so that they could be shared within the company to improve efficiency. The efficiency gains made by my work have improved our operational efficiency and were appreciated by my team members.

1. "Diverted" means to change the direction or use of something, often implying a negative connotation. It's more appropriate to use the term "shared" here to indicate the materials were accessible and usable by others within the company.
It’s impressive that your work had such a positive impact on operational efficiency. How did you approach creating proposal materials that were both effective and adaptable for future use? Did you encounter any challenges in ensuring the materials met the diverse needs of prospective foreign clients?

We kept two types of documents, PowerPoint and PDF versions, in separate folders for each industry so that anyone can easily edit the documents. Not only foreign companies, but also potential customers are impressed by a beautiful appearance, so we took care to unify the use of colors and fonts.

自然な表現

We kept two types of documents, PowerPoint and PDF versions, in separate folders for each industry so that anyone can easily edit the documents. Not only foreign companies _ but also potential customers are impressed by their beautiful appearance, so we took care to unify the use of colors and fonts.

1. It's not necessary to add a comma before "but also".
2. Use this to refer to the documents.
Your approach to creating adaptable and visually appealing materials sounds very effective. Did you find that maintaining consistency in design helped in meeting the diverse needs of clients? What feedback did you receive from them?

Attention to the appearance of proposal materials helps ensure that the proposal is communicated correctly. Although I did not receive much direct feedback from clients, half of them accepted our proposal and signed contracts, so I felt that our proposal materials were useful.

自然な表現

Attention to the appearance of proposal materials helps ensure that the proposal is communicated correctly. Although I did not receive much direct feedback from clients, half of them accepted our proposal and signed contracts, so I felt that our proposal materials were useful.

1. An alternative could be "I found it reassuring that despite limited direct feedback, a significant portion of clients accepted our proposals and proceeded to sign contracts, indicating the usefulness of our materials."

関連単語

  • distinguished（抜群の、名高い）
  • steady（落ち着いて、しっかり）
  • unrivaled（匹敵するものがない）
  • undisputed（誰もが認める、議論の余地がない）
  • unsurpassed（卓越した、最高の）
  • phenomenal（驚異的な）
  • outstanding（極めて優れた）
  • stellar（非常に素晴らしい）
  • proven（証明された、実績のある）

関連フレーズ

  • My distinguished list of accomplishments is well known among the elites in this business.（私の著名な業績は、この業界のエリートたちの間でよく知られています。）
  • I don't have much of a track record to speak of since I got a late start in this business.（この業界で仕事を始めたのが遅かったため、多くの業績をお見せできていません。）
  • My eminent status among my colleagues is due to my celebrated track record.（同僚の中で私の地位が高くなったのは、私の著名な実績のおかげです。）
  • It goes without saying that my proven track record should assure you that I am the right person for this job.（私の業績が、この仕事にふさわしい人物だと証明することは言うまでもありません。）
  • Please feel free to call any of my former bosses to get more information.（私の元上司にも気軽に声をかけてみてください。）
  • My best years are ahead of me.（私の最高の年はこれからです。）
  • I don't like to toot my own horn, but my achievements so far in this business have been described as phenomenal.（自慢するのは好きではありませんが、このビジネスでの私の成果は支持率に表れています。）
  • Frankly speaking, my track record is spotty due to my struggles with some health issues.（率直に言えば、私の実績にむらがあるのは、私のいくつかの健康問題のせいです。）
  • I am proud of my stellar track record.（私のきらびやかな業績に誇りを持っています。）
  • Although I am proud of my track record, I am looking forward to climbing even higher mountains.（私の業績を誇らしいと思っていますが、私はさらなる挑戦を楽しみにしています。）

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