おすすめの株式銘柄について説明しよう

Recommended Stocks.
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お客様が納得できるように、リスクも説明した上で、お勧めする理由を話しましょう。
Could you tell me the stocks you would recommend? I just started stock trading yesterday.
 
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Could you tell me the stocks you would recommend? I just started stock trading yesterday.

Welcome to our securities company, and congratulations on your new step forward to investment! Uh, your vague question might put you in jeopardy. Securities companies are always looking for pushovers. However, you luckily met me. I'll tell you several tips. First, you need to read more than 30 books about investment, not videos or websites, and determine which way is suitable for you. Next, never listen to others, including prominent experts. Just ignore others' dumb opinions that disturb you. Stay strong! Lastly, what's important is not to lose money through investment rather than gain it.

自然な表現

Welcome to our securities company, and congratulations on your new step forward to investment! Uh, your vague question might put you in jeopardy. Securities companies are always looking for pushovers. However, you luckily met me. I'll give you some tips. First, you need to read more than 30 books about investment, not videos or websites, and determine which way is suitable for you. Next, never listen to others, including prominent experts. Just ignore others' dumb opinions that disturb you. Stay strong! Lastly, what's important is not to lose money through investment rather than gain it.

1. We say give or share some tips.
Congratulations on starting your stock trading journey! It's great that you're seeking advice early on. I appreciate the tips you provided. Considering your approach, do you have any specific areas or industries you're interested in exploring for potential investments?

I'm confused about who a customer is.

自然な表現

I'm confused about who's the customer, I thought it was you.

1. This is much better phrasing.
It's understandable to feel confused initially, especially when navigating the complexities of stock trading. If you have any specific questions about identifying potential stocks or understanding market dynamics, feel free to ask. What aspects of stock trading are currently posing challenges for you?

God warned Lot not to look back at the cities during their flight. Lot obeyed the command, while his wife didn't and became a pillar of salt. Although you must be a customer who started stock trading yesterday and asked me to tell you the stocks I would recommend, you know much about investment as if you are an employee of us.

自然な表現

God warned Lot not to look back at the cities when they were taking flight. Lot obeyed the command, while his wife didn't and became a pillar of salt. Although you are a customer who started stock trading yesterday and asked me to tell you the stocks I'd recommend, you know much about investment as if you're an employee just like us.

1. and 2. This is much better phrasing.

関連単語

  • holder（保有者）
  • stock trading（株取引）
  • earning per share（1株当たりの利益）
  • common stock（普通株式）
  • preferred stock（優先株式）

関連フレーズ

  • Company B has higher earnings per share than Company A.（B社はA社よりも1株当たりの利益が高い。）
  • Unlike holders of common stock, holders of preferred stock are guaranteed dividend payments.（普通株式の保有者と異なり、優先株式の保有者には配当金の支払いが保証される。）
  • Investors purchase a firm's common stock hoping it will increase in value. （投資家は、価格が上昇するとの期待から会社の普通株式を買います。）
  • This company started a new venture in the oil industry, so there might be a rise in stock price.（この会社は石油事業を新しく始めたので、株価上昇の見込みがあります。）
  • When one company merges with another company, there is typically a fluctuation in stock prices. （企業が別の企業に吸収された場合、株価変動がおこります。）

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