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企業が資金調達をするための複数の方法について説明しよう

Raising Cash for Capital Expenditures.
あなたは企業が資金調達をするための複数の方法について説明しています。
関係者や投資家・投資機関からの借り入れ、金融機関からの融資、公的機関からの補助金・助成金など、資金調達方法は様々なものがあります。それぞれ英語ではどのように言うのか、確認しておきましょう。
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In terms of company fundraising, what are the methods that exist?
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In terms of company fundraising, what are the methods that exist?

There are some options. For one thing, you can issue stock, but it needs to be listed and trusted by the investing public. Other way is to get loans from commercial banks. It is easier than issuing stock. Moreover, you can choose to issue debt in the market. It can raise huge amounts of money but cost is also high compared to loans.

自然な表現

There are some options. For one   , you can issue stock, but it needs to be listed and trusted by the investing public. The other way is to get loans from commercial banks. It is easier than issuing stock. Moreover, you can choose to issue debt in the market. It can raise huge amounts of money, but the cost is also high compared to loans.

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2.4. Consider using the definite article when talking about something specific or known to the speaker.
3. Use a comma here to express proper grammatical pause and intonation.
That is quite interesting. What increases capital expenditure? Is debt service a capital expenditure?

Increases capital expenditure is that I'm not sure as well. I think so. You can sell your company's property. In that case, you can't raise large amounts of money compared to a loan, but you don't need to worry about the interest. Plus, what's trending in Japan among entrepreneurs is cloud funding. They appeal their business model on the internet and attract the investing public.

自然な表現

I am not sure what increases capital expenditure myself. I think so. You can sell your company's property. In that case, you can't raise large amounts of money compared to a loan, but you don't need to worry about the interest. Plus, what's trending in Japan among entrepreneurs is cloud funding. They promote their business model on the internet and attract the investing public.

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2. We used this verb instead to express how they advertise or make their business appealing to their audience.
I see, which one of the methods you have suggested is better? If we sell one of the properties. Is it not a risk, we will be able to recover it?

Sure. The cloud funding is where you can raise money on your web page in short. On your page, you sometimes post some videos where you appeal your ideas and prototype models to the audiences. It's a sort of donation sometimes because some people don't make a promise to pay them back their funds after the completion of the project. What is really famous example in this cloud funding recently is that a well-known animator created animation about World War 2 by raising money in this way and his animation got so popular and touched a lot of people's heart.

自然な表現

Sure. In short,    cloud funding is where you can raise money on your webpage. On it, you can post videos that promote your ideas and prototype models to an audience. It's sort of a way to get donations because sometimes, some companies don't make a promise to pay people back after the completion of their project. What is a really famous example for cloud funding recently is    a well-known animator who created an animation about World War 2 by raising money    this way. His animation got so popular and touched a lot of people's hearts.

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Keep up the good work!
  • subsidy(助成金)
  • finance(融資する)
  • capital stock(株主資本)
  • debt(負債)
  • investor(投資家)
  • Neither physical collateral nor a guarantor are required.(物的担保や保証人は必要ありません。)
  • How about selling the real estate we have?(手持ちの不動産を売却するのはどうでしょうか?)
  • We need to negotiate with our supplier in order to relax the terms of payment.(支払条件を緩和するために仕入先と交渉をする必要があります。)
  • We will shape our business plan by consulting with an individual investor.(個人投資家に相談をして、事業計画を練ります。)
  • It is possible to obtain a free loan if you use a startup loan program.(創業融資を利用すれば無担保無保証で融資を受けられることもあります。)

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