キャッシュフローの改善方法について提案しよう

Improving Cash Flow.
あなたはキャッシュフローの改善方法について提案しています。
お客様や自社の業務を想定し、具体的な改善案を説明しましょう。それをすることでどのくらいの改善が見込めるのか、数字で説明できると良いですね。
Do you have any plans on improving cash flow?
 
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Do you have any plans on improving cash flow?

I believe we should have excess cash through fundraising.
Because we don't have any chance of earning back now.

自然な表現

I believe we should have excess cash through fundraising _ 
because we don't have any chance of earning back now.

1. Don't use a full stop before BECAUSE and use it in one sentence.
Okay, that is a good idea. Do you know how we can arrange the fundraiser at this time, how to collect the money?

We have the list of fundraiser already. So we can contact them with new business plan in which we are planning to enter emerging market in the ASEAN area.

自然な表現

We have the list of fundraisers already. So we can contact them with a new business plan in which we are planning to enter the emerging market in the ASEAN area.

1. Incorrect spelling.
2. Use articles before countable nouns.
3. The same as the above. Use THE article when you are talking about something specific.
Okay, I see, are you sure the fundraiser will boost our cash flow? So, what will the theme of the fundraising event be?

There are some fundraisers who are looking for the opportunity to invest in ASEAN market in our list.
So I would like to suggest that we hold the fundraising event which is the great opportunity for the investment in ASEAN market.

自然な表現

There are some fundraisers who are looking for the opportunity to invest in the ASEAN market in our list.
So I would like to suggest that we hold the fundraising event which is a great opportunity for investment in the ASEAN market.

1. The specific market.
2. You mention the noun for the first time.
3. Don't use articles before abstract nouns.
4. The specific market.
Okay, I see, this could be a good move. Besides the fundraisers what other ways can we use to improve our cash flow?

In terms of the fixed assets, we have many propeaties. So we can consider to change these to quick assets by publishing REIT stock.

自然な表現

In terms of _ fixed assets, we have many properties. So we can consider changing these to quick assets by publishing REIT stock.

1. Don't use articles before the plural.
2. Incorrect spelling.
3. The verb CONSIDER requires a gerund (inf+ing).
Okay, good idea. You have quite brilliant ideas. So, when are all these ideas commencing, we need an increase in our cash flow by the end of this year.

It it better to commence these actions by end of this month.
For the next step, my team will make the action plan for improving our cash flow based on this discussion.
Let me send it to you by end of this week.
Thank you for your time.

自然な表現

It is better to commence these actions by the end of this month.
For the next step, my team will make the action plan for improving our cash flow based on this discussion.
Let me send it to you by the end of this week.
Thank you for your time.

1. Incorrect word.
2. The word requires the article.
3. The same as the above.

関連単語

  • payday（給料日）
  • twist（ねじる）
  • earning back（回収する）
  • excess cash（余剰資金）
  • fundraising（募金）

関連フレーズ

  • Payments should be made as early as possible.（回収はなるべく早くなるように前払いにしましょう。）
  • Let's set up the payroll date.（給与支払日の設定をしましょう。）
  • Please minimize expenses as much as you can.（経費はできるかぎり削減するようにしましょう。）
  • Try to diminish costs by turning to fundraising.（資金調達で余裕資金を確保しましょう。）
  • Please be strict when managing debt collections.（債権回収は厳しく管理しましょう。）

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