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SNSに投稿してみよう

Post to Social Networking Service
あなたは友人やフォロワーに思っていることを呟いています。
SNSサイトに近況をアップデートする際、できるだけナチュラルでポップな英語でつぶやくことができたら、第二言語としての英語の話者として一目置かれる存在になることが可能でしょう。また、コメントに対しても固くなりすぎず、ユーモアあふれた返しができるようになれば、英語でつぶやくことがもっと楽しくなるでしょう。
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My eldest son put dishes into the dishwasher the day before yesterday. He wants to play Fortnite. I told him he should finish his homework and is in charge of household chores to extend his playing time.

自然な表現

My eldest son put dishes into the dishwasher the day before yesterday. He wants to play Fortnite. I told him he should finish his homework first and is in charge of household chores if he wants to extend his playing time.

1 before he plays the game
2 added for better expression
That's a great system. If he wants to play games more, he should earn it somehow. How long does he usually play Fortnite? Do you usually post things like this to SNS?

Yes, I am proud that I created the system. He just starts playing Fortnite since the day before yesterday. He played Duo in the game with his real-friend. I usually post things like this to Facebook. How about you?

自然な表現

Yes, I am proud that I created the system. He just started playing Fortnite   the day before yesterday. He played the game in Duo mode with his real-friend. I usually post things like this on my Facebook account. How about you?

1 should be past tense
2 'since' is not needed
3 better wording
4 better wording, should use preposition 'on', post something on FB
I think that video games are fun and inspiring, but only if played for a limited number of hours. When it comes to SNS, I usually use Instagram. Facebook isn't that popular nowadays in my country. Do you use Instagram?

Yes, I also use Instagram, but I post to it not about my family episodes. I often post food and flowers to Instagram. On the other hand, I post my family life on Facebook for limited friends.

自然な表現

Yes, I also use Instagram, but I don't post things about my family on it. I often post foods and flowers on Instagram. On the other hand, I post my family life on Facebook for a limited number of friends.

1 better wording, your expression sounds a bit unnatural
2 'food' can be plural when it is 'different types of foods'
3 should use preposition 'on'
4 added for better expression
  • enter(入力する)
  • click(クリックする)
  • upload(アップロードする)
  • share(共有する)
  • write(投稿する)
  • Did you see the picture that I uploaded?(私がアップロードした写真を見ましたか?)
  • Be careful with your privacy settings.(プライバシー設定には気をつけてください。)
  • Press the enter key to write on the SNS.(エンターを押してSNSに入力してください。)
  • Click the button after entering the words.(言葉を入力をし終えたらボタンを押してください。)
  • I want to upload my picture on my SNS.(SNSに写真をアップロードしたいです。)

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