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家族の病状を説明してみよう

Your Child's Health
あなたは子供の病状について説明しています。
自分の体調について説明する事も簡単ではありませんが、他人の体調について説明する事は更に英語力が必要になります。正確に病状を伝えるためには身体や病気に関する語彙を学んでおく事が重要です。
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What seems to be the problem with your child?
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What seems to be the problem with your child?
#miss

She has an allergy for pollen, so she is having itchy eyes and rushes on her cheeks. I'm bringing the medicine notebook for her and these are the medicines that had been prescribed in the former clinic.

#correct

She has an allergy to pollen, so she is having itchy eyes and rashes on her cheeks. I'm bringing the medicine notebook for her and these are the medicines that had been prescribed in the former clinic.

I see, that's unfortunate. So she's developed allergies to pollen at such a young age? I know many people that are allergic to pollen. When are you taking her to the doctor?
#miss

I took her to the hospital for the first time when she was five years old. The doctor suggested her to undergo a blood test and then she found to be allergic to pollen.
My parents and I are also allergic to pollen.

#correct

I took her to the hospital for the first time when she was five years old. The doctor suggested her to undergo a blood test and then she was found to be allergic to pollen.
My parents and I are also allergic to pollen.

Oh, I see. Then it's a genetic thing. It's good that you're careful about things like that. They can end up being very problematic in children.
#good

I hope so too. By the way, I have something to ask you. She often cried out in her sleep since she began to take this medicine, so I'm afraid that was caused by the side effects of the medicine. what do you think about this, doctor? If the medicine seems not to fit her, could you change it to another one, please?

#or

I hope so too. By the way, I have something to ask you. She often cried out in her sleep since she began to take this medicine, so I'm afraid that was caused by the side effects of the medicine. what do you think about this, doctor? If the medicine is not suited for her, please change another one.

Well, I think we should run some tests, to see if she has a bad reaction to the medicine. There are a few ways that allergy can be treated. You should bring her over so we could see what the problem is.
#miss

She is in the waiting room so I'll go and bring her here now. Is it OK?

#correct

She is in the waiting room, so I'll go and bring her here now. Is it OK?

Oh, she is waiting outside? Why is that, you should her inside immediately, she can get cold if she stays outside. Please call her.
#miss

Not outside of course, she is in the waiting room with her grand-ma so I'll call her now.

#correct

Not outside of course, she is in the waiting room with her grandma so I'll call her now.

  • chronic disease(持病)
  • medicine(薬)
  • appetite(食欲)
  • fever(熱)
  • inflammation(炎症)
  • She has skin infammation.(彼女の肌は炎症を起こしている。)
  • What food do you recommend for her?(彼女にどのような食事をお薦めしますか?)
  • She can't sleep well.(彼女は安らかに寝れない。)
  • He doesn't have any allergies.(彼はアレルギーはありません。)
  • He doesn't have an appetite.(彼は食欲がありません。)

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  • 日常
  • 中級
  • シーンリクエスト
  • 体調
  • 病院