学校の近くのお店について聞いてみよう

Chatting about stores near school
あなたは学校近くのお店について友達に聞いています
生活必需品を買うために行くコンビニエンスストアやスーパーマーケットだけでなく、週末にお出かけするショッピングモールやカフェなどについても友達に聞いてみましょう。友達にオススメのお店を聞いたりするのも良いかもしれないですね。また、お店への行き方や営業時間についても一緒に聞いておきましょう。
Are there any favorite stores around your school?
 
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Are there any favorite stores around your school?

Yes, I like the Chinese restaurant which is adjacent to this building. They provide several lunch service menus and they are so nice and economical. There are also many restaurants on the top floor of the front building. I recommend those restaurants. They are relatively good.

自然な表現

Yes, I like the Chinese restaurant which is adjacent to this building. They provide several lunch service menus and they're so nice and economical. There are also many restaurants on the top floor of the front building. I recommend those restaurants. They're relatively good.

1, 2. Try to use contractions to make your sentences sound more idiomatic.
Oh really, I have never been to that place. It sounds very interesting. How many times have you been there?

As for the adjacent restaurant, I often go there. I think I've been there more than twenty times. As for the restaurants in the front building, I also often go there. I haven't counted but I go there at least once of the week.

自然な表現

As for the adjacent restaurant, I often go there. I think I've been there more than twenty times. As for the restaurants in the front building, I also often go there. I haven't counted, but I go there at least once a week.

1. Add a comma before "but" when introducing a contrasting idea.
2. You need to use this article before a time expression when referring to frequency.
I am interested in the Chinese restaurant the most, I didn't know you were an appraiser of Chinese food. What do you order most?

It is famous for dim sum. You can enjoy wide variety of dim sum for lunch. If you have much time, I recommend you the dim sum buffet. You can order any dim sum from all for 90 mins. It's not so expensive, and it is 1980 yen.

自然な表現

It's famous for its dim sum. You can enjoy a wide variety of dim sum for lunch. If you have enough time, I recommend _ the dim sum buffet. You can order any dim sum from all for 90 mins. It's not so expensive, just 1980 yen.

1. Try to use contractions to make your sentences sound more idiomatic.
2. Add this possessive adjective to indicate whose dim sum you are talking about.
3. Add this article before a singular noun.
4. Use this determiner when you mean "sufficient".
5. This pronoun was quite redundant here as it is assumed from context.
6. Use this adverb here to avoid wordiness and repetition. Use it when you mean "no more than".
Oh really, it is not expensive at all. Do you want to accompany me there for lunch today? We will have a good time.

Good idea, but I'm sorry but I'm busy today, because I have to prepare for evening meeting. How about tomorrow?

自然な表現

Good idea. _ I'm sorry, but I'm busy today _ because I have to prepare for the evening meeting. How about tomorrow?

1. There's no need to add this conjunction here as you're not introducing a contrasting idea.
2. Add a comma before "but" when introducing a contrasting idea.
3. No need for a comma before or after “because".
4. Add this article here as you’re referring to a specific meeting.
Oh really, that is quite a bummer. Okay we can go tomorrow and in the meantime, I will go to the Italian restaurant.

Okay. As for an Italian restaurant, I recommend one in the front building. It's called Tola, and you can enjoy authentic Italian pasta there. It's a little bit expensive, but it's worth of eating.

自然な表現

Okay. As for an Italian restaurant, I recommend one in the front building. It's called Tola, and you can enjoy authentic Italian pasta there. It's a little bit expensive, but it's worth _ eating.

1. No need to add a preposition after the adjective "worth".

関連単語

  • near（近くの）
  • shop（店）
  • far（遠い）
  • here（ここ）
  • closest（一番近くの）

関連フレーズ

  • Which store is the closest to the school?（一番学校から近いお店はどれですか？）
  • Is there a shop near the school?（学校の近くにお店はありますか？）
  • The shop is too far from here.（あのお店はここからは遠すぎる。）
  • Can you tell me how to get there?（どのように行くか教えてくれますか？）
  • The shop is across the street from the school.（あのお店は学校の向かい側にあります。）

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