日本と留学先の違いについて説明しよう

Japan vs.Your Study Abroad Country
あなたは日本と留学先との違いについて説明しています。
出身地と留学先の違いは語学学校のレポートのお題にもなるほど一般的な話題です。また、留学先にはきっと色々な国から留学生が来ています。他の国から来た留学生の出身国と日本の違いを教え合う事も興味深いでしょう。
What is the difference between Japan and this country ?
 
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What is the difference between Japan and this country ?

There are many differences between Japan and this country. For example, public transportation is always amazingly punctual in Japan while trains and buses are always delayed in this country. Also, Japan is very clean, and we do not see garbage on a street while it is not true in this country. However, Japanese people are not as friendly as people in this country.

自然な表現

There are many differences between Japan and this country. For example, public transportation is always amazingly punctual in Japan while trains and buses are always delayed in this country. Also, Japan is very clean, and we do not see garbage on the street while it is not so in this country. However, Japanese people are not as friendly as people in this country.

1. You need a definite article here.
2. Use ''so'' o to refer back to something that has just been mentioned.
That is indeed the case. No country in the world is as clean and as punctual as Japan. What do you think about food in this country? Can you compare it to Japanese food?

The Japanese people tend to be more introvert compared to foreigners, thus we seem to be less friendly than people in this country. The Japanese people take time to develop a relationship based on trust-building. Punctuality and keeping a promise are very important in the Japanese society to be liked by others.

自然な表現

The Japanese people tend to be more introverted compared to foreigners, thus we seem to be less friendly than people in this country. The Japanese people take time to develop relationships based on trust-building. Punctuality and keeping a promise are very important in    Japanese society to be liked by others.

1. ''Introvert'' is a noun that refers to a person with qualities of a personality type known as introversion. Therefore, use the adjective ''introverted'' which means reserved.
2. Make a plural form when talking about things in general.
3. You say 'the Society' (with a capital S) if you are referring to a particular association (e.g. The Royal Society of Arts). You say 'society', without any article in front of it, if you mean people in general within one culture.
Would you like anything to change regarding all those Japanese people's characteristics? Do you have typical Japanese characteristics? What other differences would you like to share with me?

Yes, the expected behavior for people in Japan is listening to what others say. Insisting on own opinions or perspectives is recognized as a disgraceful behavior in the Japanese society. Japan is a homogeneous country, so many people are still hesitant to accept immigrants from other countries. Although it is really shamed, English proficiency among the Japanese people is ranked at the lowest in the Asian countries. It is even inferior to North Korea according to an article which I read.

自然な表現

Yes, the expected behavior for people in Japan is listening to what others say. Insisting on own opinions or perspectives is recognized as    disgraceful behavior in    Japanese society. Japan is a homogeneous country, so many people are still hesitant to accept immigrants from other countries. Although it is really shamed, English proficiency among the Japanese people is ranked at the lowest in    Asian countries. It is even inferior to North Korea according to an article that I read.

1. You do not need an article before the uncountable noun ''behavior''.
2. You say 'the Society' (with a capital S) if you are referring to a particular association (e.g. The Royal Society of Arts). You say 'society', without any article in front of it, if you mean people in general within one culture.
3. You do not need a definite article when referring to something in general.
4. Use ''that'' in a defining clause and ''which'' in a non-defining clause.
  • difference(違い)
  • study abroad destination (留学先)
  • between(間の)
  • than(よりも)
  • compare(比較する)
  • Japan is safer than my study abroad destination.(日本は私の留学先よりも安全です。)
  • Which country do you like better?(あなたはどちらの国が好きですか?)
  • What is the difference between Japan and your study abroad destination?(日本と留学先の違いはなんですか?)
  • I like the food in my study abroad place more than Japanese food.(私は、日本食よりも留学先の食事の方が好きです。)
  • Japanese people are nicer compared with the people there.(留学先の人々よりも、日本人の方が優しいです。)

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