天ぷらの写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of Tempura
写真を見て内容の説明をしてください
天ぷらは野菜や魚介類等を小麦粉等からなる衣をつけて揚げた日本を代表する料理です。食材や作り方に関する事だけではなく、料理の歴史や食べ方の違い等も伝えたら喜ばれるかもしれません。
Please describe this picture.
 
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Please describe this picture.

This is a picture of a dish called tempra.
There are some vegetables and shrimps on a large dish in the center of the picture.
They were deep-fried after dipped in batter.
On the left side of the picture, I can see three kinds of condiments on a dish with a rectangular shape.
I think they are grated white radish, grated ginger, and chopped green onions from the foreground of the dish.

自然な表現

This is a picture of a dish called tempura.
There are some vegetables and shrimp on a large dish in the center of the picture.
They were deep-fried after being dipped in batter.
On the left side of the picture, I can see three kinds of condiments on a dish with a rectangular shape.
I think they are grated white radish, grated ginger, and chopped green onions from the foreground of the dish.

1. Correct spelling.
2. Correct plural noun to use here.
3. You were missing this verb to clarify your idea here.
That was a great description of the picture! You were able to give the important details of it. Where do you think that picture was taken? In a restaurant? At home?

I think it was taken at a restaurant since the dish for condiment is special.
There are three places for three different condiments separated by two borders in the dish.
Such a dish is generally used in restaurants.

自然な表現

I think it was taken at a restaurant since the dish for the condiments is special.
There are three places for three different condiments separated by two borders in the dish.
Such a dish is generally used in restaurants.

1. The definite article ("the'')is used before a noun to define it as something specific (e.g., something previously mentioned or known, something unique, or something being identified by the speaker).
2. Fix the agreement mistake here by making use of the plural form. You are referring to a plural noun.
Have you ever made tempura at home? Is it easy to make? Was it as delicious as the one served at restaurants?

Q1
Yes, I have.
I have cooked tempura many times.
Q2
No, it isn't.
It isn't easy to make tempura well.
Q3
Yes, it was.
When l cooked it very well, It was as delicious as the one served at restaurants.
Actually, my son is better at deep-frying ingredients than I am since he worked part time as a cook in a Okinawan restaurant.
Therefore, he generally makes tempura nowadays.
Deep-fried food he cooks is always crispy and tasty.
I like it better than one served at restaurants.

自然な表現

Q1
Yes, I have.
I have cooked tempura many times.
Q2
No, it isn't.
It isn't easy to make tempura well.
Q3
Yes, it was.
When l cooked it very well, It was as delicious as the one served at restaurants.
Actually, my son is better at deep-frying ingredients than I am since he worked part-time as a cook in an Okinawan restaurant.
Therefore, he generally makes tempura nowadays.
The deep-fried food he cooks is always crispy and tasty.
I like it better than the one served at restaurants.

1. The indefinite article (an) is used before a singular noun beginning with a vowel sound.
2-3. The definite article ("the'')is used before a noun to define it as something specific (e.g., something previously mentioned or known, something unique, or something being identified by the speaker).
  • bell pepper(パプリカ、ピーマン)
  • batter coating(天ぷらの衣)
  • specialty restaurants(専門店)
  • powdered green tea(抹茶)
  • lotus root(れんこん)
  • In some restaurants, powdered green tea salt comes with the tempura.(レストランによっては、抹茶塩が天ぷらと出されます。)
  • Vegetables are coated in batter and fried to make a tempura.(野菜に衣をつけて揚げたものが天ぷらです。)
  • Eggplants, pumpkins, shrimp, and bell peppers are often made into tempuras.(ナス、カボチャ、エビ、パプリカなどは天ぷらにすることが多いです。)
  • There are many traditional, specialty restaurants for tempura in Asakusa.(浅草には、伝統的な天ぷらの専門店がたくさんあります。)
  • It is popular among foreigners as well.(これは外国人の間でも人気である。)

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  • 日常
  • 初級
  • シーンリクエスト
  • 写真描写問題
  • 接客業/飲食店