寿司の写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of Sushi.
写真を見て内容の説明をしてください
寿司は日本を代表する酢飯と魚を組み合わせた伝統料理です。海外でもとても有名なので、興味がある方はたくさんいらっしゃると思います。寿司に使われている食材の英語名を覚える事で説明がより丁寧になるでしょう。
Please describe this picture.
 
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Please describe this picture.

This is a traditional Japanese food which is called sushi. Vinegared rice is under the sushi's topping.There are various types of topping in sushi like raw fish, boiled fish.

自然な表現

This is a traditional Japanese food which is called sushi. Vinegared rice is under the sushi's topping.    There are various types of toppings in sushi like raw fish, and boiled fish.

1. Watch the spacing.
2. "various' means there is more than one topping.
3. A conjunction is missing. ‘and’, ‘or,’ and ‘but’ connect two parts of sentences that are similar in grammatical status. Use ‘and’ for adding information, ‘or’ for giving alternatives, and ‘but’ for unexpected or different information.
You accurately described sushi. Do you like to eat sushi in restaurants or have you tried making it at home?

I've never cooked sushi before. I occasionally take out it at supermarket. I often go to conveyor belt sushi restaurant that is affordable to eat. As I kid, I couldn't eat raw fish.

自然な表現

I've never cooked sushi before. I occasionally take it out at the supermarket. I often go to a conveyor belt sushi restaurant that is affordable to eat. As a kid, I couldn't eat raw fish.

1. The word is misplaced. Move it to the correct position.
2. Including a specific article in your writing is significant. The presence of "the" is crucial when referring to something specific, be it an object, person, type of object or person, or a particular quality of an object or person. Neglecting to include it can pose challenges in discussing a specific object or person unless you resort to using words like "this," "that," or a proper noun.
3. You are missing an article. “a” and “an” are different forms of the same word, the indefinite article that often precedes a noun. “a” is used before a noun that starts with a consonant sound (e.g., “s,” “t,” “v”). “an” is used before a noun that starts with a vowel sound (e.g., “a,” “o,” “i”). e.g. an apple, a delicious apple.
4. The selected term is not suitable for this sentence. This is a replacement.
It's nice that you like sushi. Conveyor belt sushi restaurants provide an easy way to sample a wide range of sushi. Have you developed a predilection for a specific sort of sushi as you've become more familiar with it?

I agree with you. Have you tried sushi? If you have, what sort of ingredients do you like? Is there eating raw fish culture in your country?

自然な表現

I agree with you. Have you tried sushi? If you have, what sort of ingredients do you like? Is there eating raw fish culture in your country?

1. You are correct. You can also say 'Does your country have a tradition of consuming raw fish?'
Raw fish is a key part of Japanese cuisine. While raw fish is less common in my nation, it is used in a few dishes. Have you tried other Japanese foods other than sushi, or do you love tasting different ethnic cuisines?

Never tried except for it. That question doesn't matter with this subject.

自然な表現

I have never tried it except for it. That question doesn't matter with this subject.

1&2. It’s incomplete. This is an additional component to a hanging sentence.
That is fair. Exploring diverse cuisines can be a pleasurable experience. Is there a specific reason you haven't tried other Japanese foods yet? Is there a particular dish you'd want to try?

None

自然な表現

There is none at the moment.

1. A sentence is a group of words, usually containing a verb, that expresses a thought in the form of a statement, question, instruction, or exclamation and starts with a capital letter when written.
  • sea urchin(ウニ)
  • squid(いか)
  • salmon roe(いくら)
  • conger eel(あなご)
  • Some toppings are raw materials, whereas others like eel are not.(いくつかのねたは生ものである一方で、うなぎ等のその他のものは生ではない。)
  • Fatty meat of tuna is my favorite.(私のお気に入りはマグロのとろです。)
  • Vinegared rice is under the sushi's topping.(寿司のねたの下には酢飯があります。)
  • We make hand rolled sushi at home.(私たちは手巻き寿司を家で作ります。)
  • Let's go to a conveyor belt sushi restaurant.(回転寿司に行きましょう。)

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  • 写真描写問題
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