ラーメンの写真描写をしてみよう

Describe a picture of ramen noodles.
写真を見て内容の説明をしてください
近年世界中で人気が高まってきているラーメン。インスタントラーメンも人気があります。様々な種類のある麺やスープ、具材に関してはもちろん、うどんやそばとの違いも説明出来ると良いでしょう。
Please describe this picture.
 
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Please describe this picture.

Close your eye. Please imagine the situation, I am going to say. There is noodles, and seaweed. The soup is tasty Shouyu taste. There are some vegetable on it. You are using a chop stick and picking up noodles. You feel tasty smell with evaporation of hot water. You are eating it. Around your mouse, tasty soup and noodles are spreading. This is one of the amazingest noodle for you. You feel happiness. You are eating it. You are having sips. Now, it is empty. All right, open your eye.

自然な表現

Close your eyes. Please imagine the situation   I am going to say. There are noodles and seaweed. The soup has a tasty Shouyu taste. There are some vegetables in it. You are using a chopstick and picking up noodles. You feel a tasty smell with the evaporation of hot water. You are eating it. Around your mouse, tasty soup and noodles are spreading. This is one of the most amazing noodles for you. You feel happy. You are eating it. You are having sips. Now, it is empty. All right, open your eyes.

1, 14 - should be plural because you're referring to both of their eyes
2 - there's no need for a comma here
3 - the verb needs to agree with the subject
4 - use the verb 'to have' to refer to 'taste'
5 - use 'a' because you're referring to one kind of taste
6 - should be plural because you said 'some'
7 - use 'in' to refer to where you'd find vegetables
8 - this is one word
9 - use 'a' because you're referring to one smell
10 - use 'the' because you're referring to the evaporation of something specific
11 - this is the correct superlative of 'amazing'
12 - this is the correct spelling of the word
13 - this is the correct adjective
That is an excellent description of the picture! A correction teacher will give you all the necessary corrections and explanations. Do you like eating noodles? What kinds of noodles do you like to eat?

Okay, that means I made some mistakes about my previous box. I try not to make mistakes. I especially week against the usage of proposition, tense, and articles. I am checking my scripts again and again, so that I don't make simple mistakes. Anyway, I love eating noodles. I especially like Ramen. Ramen is nothing but amazing.

自然な表現

Okay, that means I made some mistakes in my previous answer. I will try not to make mistakes. I am especially weak at the usage of prepositions, verb tense, and articles. I am checking my scripts again and again, so that I don't make simple mistakes. Anyway, I love eating noodles. I especially like Ramen. Ramen is nothing but amazing.

1 - you should say 'in' your previous answer
2 - it makes more sense to say 'answer' rather than 'box'
3 - add 'will' because you're referring to something you're still going to do
4 - you forgot to use the verb 'to be' here
5 - this is the correct spelling of the adjective
6 - this is the correct spelling of the word
7 - you probably meant to say 'verb tense'
You don't have to worry about it. Pay attention to your correction teachers' advice, and you will improve your grammar. I've heard about ramen, by the way. What kind of ramen is your favorite? How often do you eat it?

I ate chicken Ramen yesterday. That was amazing.

自然な表現

I ate chicken Ramen yesterday. That was amazing.

Good, nothing to add or fix here.
Is that so? What made this particular chicken ramen amazing? Was there anything that was added or done differently?

I don't know what is added in specially, because this is the secret of the restaurant.
Yeah, I ate Ramen at restaurant yesterday. The taste of ramen in restaurant is different from the instant one.

自然な表現

I don't know what is added in especially because this is the secret of the restaurant.
Yeah, I ate Ramen at a restaurant yesterday. The taste of ramen in a restaurant is different from the instant one.

1 - this is the correct spelling of the adverb
2, 3 - use 'a' because you're not referring to a specific restaurant.
Absolutely. I used to dislike eating noodles when I lived in the U.K. You do not get them in restaurants there, just the instant variety to eat at home. When I moved to Thailand, I fell in love with eating them! It was very surprising.

Wow, maybe the taste is different? When I was in Denmark, I ate ramen sometimes. However, that's not good taste. Perhaps it is better to eat the original county.

自然な表現

Wow, maybe the taste is different? When I was in Denmark, I ate ramen sometimes. However, it didn't have good taste. Perhaps it is better to eat it in the original country.

1 - this is a clearer way to say what you wanted
2 - add an object after the verb 'eat'
3 - don't forget the preposition 'in' to refer to a place
4 - this is the correct spelling of the word.

関連単語

  • instant noodles（インスタントラーメン）
  • region（地域）
  • roasted pork fillet（チャーシュー）
  • bland（さっぱりした）
  • thick soup（こってりしたスープ）

関連フレーズ

  • Instant noodles in Japan are of high quality.（日本のインスタントラーメンは高品質です。）
  • The type of noodles and broth for ramen differ by region.（ラーメンは、地域によって麺やスープの種類が異なります。）
  • Ramen that has a more refreshing taste is more popular among women.（よりさっぱりとした味わいのラーメンの方が女性には人気があります。）
  • My favorite ramen topping is roasted pork fillet.（私が特に好きなラーメンの具材はチャーシューです。）
  • Ramens in thick soup are often served with rice.（こってりしたラーメンはよくご飯と出される。）

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  • シーンリクエスト
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