がんの患者を診察してみよう

Examining a cancer patient.
あなたは問診票を確認しながらがんにかかった患者を診察しています。
具体的な症状を確認し、病状や治療について、医学的な内容も含めて説明してみましょう。
I'd like to consult with a doctor concerning my cancer.
 
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I'd like to consult with a doctor concerning my cancer.

The results of the biopsy on your breast reached us. The analysis indicates the tumor is a carcinoma characterized by luminal A. Clinically, they are low grade, slow growing, and have the best prognosis with less incidence of relapse and a higher survival rate. Hormone therapy has shown a high response rate in treating this subtype of breast cancer, while chemotherapy has limited benefits. Breast cancer subtypes are widely recognized into four types: luminal A, luminal B, HER2-positive, and triple-negative. Now, I'll explain those four types in detail.

自然な表現

The results of the biopsy on your breast reached us. The analysis indicates that the tumor is a carcinoma characterized by luminal A. Clinically, they are low grade, slow growing, and have the best prognosis with less incidence of relapse and a higher survival rate. Hormone therapy has shown a high response rate in treating this subtype of breast cancer, while chemotherapy has limited benefits. Breast cancer subtypes are widely recognized into four types: luminal A, luminal B, HER2-positive, and triple-negative. Now, I'll explain those four types in detail.

1. Use ''that'' to introduce information to the sentence.
Thank you for sharing this important information with me. I'm relieved to hear that my tumor is luminal A, which has a favorable prognosis. I'm interested in learning more about the treatment options for this subtype of breast cancer. Can you please provide more details about hormone therapy and the limited benefits of chemotherapy?

The four subtypes are categorized based on the expression of hormone receptors, specifically estrogen receptor-positive (ER+), progesterone receptor-positive (PR+), human epidermal growth factor receptor-positive (HER2+), and triple-negative (TNBC). Luminal A tumors have E and/or PR receptors, don't have HER2, and have a low expression of Ki-67, a cell proliferation marker, less than 20%. Luminal B tumors are ER-positive, can be PR-negative, and have high Ki-67 expression, greater than 20%. HER2-positive tumors have high HER2 expression without ER and PR. A lack of ER, PR, and HER2 characterizes triple-negative breast cancer. Next, I'll explain about hormone therapy and chemotherapy.

自然な表現

The four subtypes are categorized based on the expression of hormone receptors, specifically estrogen receptor-positive (ER+), progesterone receptor-positive (PR+), human epidermal growth factor receptor-positive (HER2+), and triple-negative (TNBC). Luminal A tumors have E and/or PR receptors, don't have HER2, and have a low expression of Ki-67, a cell proliferation marker, less than 20%. Luminal B tumors are ER-positive, can be PR-negative, and have high Ki-67 expression, greater than 20%. HER2-positive tumors have high HER2 expression without ER and PR. A lack of ER, PR, and HER2 characterizes triple-negative breast cancer. Next, I'll explain     hormone therapy and chemotherapy.

1. Leave out ''about'' as it is not necessary.
Sure, please go ahead and elaborate on hormone therapy and chemotherapy. I appreciate your information.

First, luminal A or B subtype tumors depend on your natural hormones to grow; they will be described as estrogen-positive (ER+) or progesterone-positive (PR+). Hormonal therapy is used to prevent the growth, spread, or recurrence of breast cancer. Next, ki-67 levels at 20% divide subtype luminal into A and B. Luminal B with high Ki-67 expression needs chemotherapy. To sum up, after undergoing breast-conserving surgery to remove the cancer and some normal tissue around it, you need hormone therapy and radiation.

自然な表現

First, luminal A or B subtype tumors depend on your natural hormones to grow; they will be described as estrogen-positive (ER+) or progesterone-positive (PR+). Hormonal therapy is used to prevent the growth, spread, or recurrence of breast cancer. Next, ki-67 levels at 20% divide subtype luminal into A and B. Luminal B with high Ki-67 expression needs chemotherapy. To sum up, after undergoing breast-conserving surgery to remove the cancer and some normal tissue around it, you need hormone therapy and radiation.

1. Alternatively, use, ''In conclusion'' in place of ''To sum up''.
  • symptoms(症状)
  • examination(検査)
  • medical treatment(治療)
  • hospitalize(入院させる)
  • surgery(手術)
  • A simple surgery can cure it because we found the cancer at an early stage.(早期に癌を発見したため、簡単な手術で治すことができます。)
  • I think you need to be hospitalized.(あなたは入院する必要があると思う。)
  • The results of the examination came in today.(検査の結果が今日届きました。)
  • I'm sorry, but the necessary medical treatment is unavailable here.(申し訳ごさいません。必要な治療はここでは行っていません。)
  • Have there been any improvements in your symptoms?(症状の改善はありましたか?)

こんな方にオススメ

  • ビジネス
  • 上級
  • シーンリクエスト
  • 病院/医療業界
  • 病院
  • 診察