喫煙できる場所を案内しよう

Showing guests to the smoking area.
あなたはお客様に喫煙できる場所を案内しています。
日本では分煙になっていますが、それを知らない外国人のお客様ももちろんいらっしゃるはずです。また店内がすべて禁煙の場合もありますので、その時はタバコを吸える場所を案内してあげましょう。
Do you have a smoking area?
 
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Do you have a smoking area?

We are very sorry for this inconvenience but smoking inside this restaurant is prohibited except for the designated smoking area over there. To get to the smoking area, go straight down this corridor, turn right at the end, and you will find the place on your right side. Am I clear enough for you?

自然な表現

We are very sorry for this inconvenience but smoking inside this restaurant is not allowed except for the designated smoking area over there. To get to the smoking area, go straight down this corridor, turn right at the end, and you will find the place on your right side. Am I clear enough for you?

1. Your expression was totally fine, this is just an alternative.
So go straight and turn right, is that right? Is it a large area? If it isn't I might as well go outside and smoke.

Exactly, you are right. The designated smoking room in this restaurant is not very large. If you are fine with the cold temperature outside, it might be better for you to go outside and smoke. Smoking on the street is still OK in this area although it is not possible in central Tokyo.

自然な表現

Exactly, you are right. The designated smoking room  is not very large. However, if you are fine with the cold temperature outside, it might be better for you to go outside and smoke. Smoking on the street is still OK in this area although it is not possible in central Tokyo.

1. You don't have to repeat this phrase as it is already implied.
2. Instead of using a conjunction to begin a sentence, use an adverb to do so.
I'd still want to see and give it a try.Maybe it is not so crowded after all. If I decide to smoke outside, which way leads to the exit?

The designated smoking room may be very crowded at this time. I am sorry for the inconvenience. If you would like to smoke outside, go straight down the corridor over there, turn left at the end, then you will find the exit. Please be careful if you go to central Tokyo. Smoking on the street in central Tokyo is prohibited. You will be punished with a penalty of 3000 JPY if you are found out by the watchmen.

自然な表現

The designated smoking room may be very crowded at this time. I am sorry for the inconvenience. Also, if you would like to smoke outside, go straight down the corridor over there, turn left at the end, then you will find the exit. Please be careful if you go to central Tokyo. Smoking on the street in central Tokyo is prohibited. You will be punished with a penalty of 3000 JPY if you are found out by the watchmen.

1. Instead of using a conjunction to begin a sentence, use an adverb to do so.
  • smoking area(喫煙所)
  • full(満員の、満席の)
  • smoke(タバコを吸う)
  • second-hand smoke(受動喫煙)
  • separate rooms(別々の部屋)
  • Please follow me.(ご案内します。)
  • Smoking or non-smoking?(喫煙席になさいますか、禁煙席になさいますか?)
  • Do you smoke, sir? (タバコは吸われますか?)
  • We don't have any smoking area.(喫煙席はありません。)
  • All the smoking tables are taken.(喫煙席は満席です。)

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