他の地域の支店を案内しよう

Introducing a branch store in another location.
あなたは他の地域の支店を案内しています。
他の支店に関して説明する際には地図等を使って土地勘がないお客様にも分かりやすく伝えるようにすると丁寧です。ホームページに載ってる場合は検索の仕方等もお伝えするとよいでしょう。
Is there another branch store?
 
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Is there another branch store?

Yes, there is another branch office in the neighborhood prefecture. It is located in Yokohama city where it takes one hour to go from here by car. Our company has 12 branch offices across Japan. If you can tell me your location, I can tell you the closest branch office to your location.

自然な表現

Yes, there is another branch office in the neighborhood prefecture. It is located in Yokohama city where it takes one hour to go from here by car. Our company has twelve branch offices across Japan. If you can tell me your location, I can tell you the closest branch office to your location.

1. Not needed. It’s already known that Yokohama is a city
2. Write numbers as words
3. Unnecessary words. Consider removing them
I'm relieved to hear that. I love your shop but I don't know where to locate them. Do you happen to have an online store?

Yes, our online store is also available! It opens for 24hours. If you buy something more than 5000 JPY, a shipping fee will be for free. We also periodically provide a 20% discount coupon with our registered frequent customers. I would recommend you to apply for our membership now!

自然な表現

Yes, our online store is also available! It’s open twenty-four hours a day. If you spend more than 5000 JPY, shipping is free. We also periodically provide a 20% discount coupon with our registered frequent customers. I would recommend you to apply for our membership now!

1. A more natural phrase
2. This is a better word
3. As #1
That sounds good. What are your payment options and you delivery time frames? It's important that we know those this early.

You can pay by credit card on the EC site. We accept VISA, Master Card, and AMEX. You can choose two hour time slot for the delivery time from 9 am to 9 pm. For more details, you can see it in the EC site.

自然な表現

You can pay by credit card on the EC site. We accept VISA, MasterCard, and AMEX. You can choose two hour time slots for the delivery times from 9 am to 9 pm. For more details, you can see it in the EC site.

1 and 2. Use the plural words instead of the singular
  • map(地図)
  • around here(ここ周辺)
  • new branch(新たな支店)
  • search(検索する)
  • downtown(繁華街、都市部)
  • No, but we are planning to open one next month. (いいえ。しかし来月一店舗オープンする予定です。)
  • You can search for them on our homepage.(弊社のホームページで検索できます。)
  • There's two. I can show you the way on the map.(2つあります。地図で道順を案内できます。)
  • We have a new store downtown.(繁華街に新店舗があります。)
  • Not around here.(ここ周辺にはありません。)

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