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I'm having a good time, but I'm a little tired. I took my summer vacation last week, and I was busy going scuba diving and traveling to Yamagata Prefecture.
I'm having a good time, but I'm a little tired. I took my summer vacation last week, and I was busy going scuba diving and traveling to Yamagata Prefecture.
Scuba diving was my highlight in this summer. When I stayed Yamagata, the weather was not so good, and especially around relativelly high attitude areas, it was foggy. Therefore, I was not able to enjoy the sceneries of the nature which they originally were. On the other hand, it was very clear when I went scuba diving. The waves were so calm that I could dive very easily. Under these situations, the water tends to be clear and we can see creatures clearly. Look, this is the movie under the water. There were several kinds of schools!
Scuba diving was my highlight of this summer. When I stayed in Yamagata, the weather was not so good, and especially around relatively high altitude areas, it was foggy. Therefore, I was not able to enjoy the natural scenery as it originally was. On the other hand, it was very clear when I went scuba diving. The waves were so calm that I could dive very easily. Under these conditions, the water tends to be clear and we can see creatures clearly. Look, this is the video taken underwater. There were several kinds of schools of fish!
2. Should use preposition 'in' to indicate a location.
3. 4. Correct spelling.
5. This is a more natural phrasing in this context.
Another expression: I wasn't able to enjoy the scenery in its original state.
6. This is a better word choice when describing environmental or weather-related circumstances, such as water clarity.
7. This is a more natural phrasing in this context, 'movie' is used for Hollywood movies you watch in a movie theater, not videos.
8. This was added to make the sentence complete and clearer.
As the schools didn't leave even though I was swimming toward them, I was surrounded by them and felt like as if i was fish. You might be lucky enough to spot sea turtles in that area, but the largest creature I saw that day was a moray eel. I'm keen to see large marine life, so I plan to visit Ishigaki Island around May to see a school of manta rays.
As the schools didn't leave even though I was swimming toward them, I was surrounded by them and felt as if I were a fish. You might be lucky enough to spot sea turtles in that area, but the largest creature I saw that day was a moray eel. I'm keen to see large marine life, so I plan to visit Ishigaki Island around May to see a school of manta rays.
2. You should use indefinite article 'a' when referring to yourself as a single fish in a figurative sense.
Actually, I already have a deep diving certification, so I can dive to a depth of 30 meters. It is said that divers can enjoy over 90 percents of diving spots if they have the certification.
Since manta rays spend their daytime in shallow water, I could see them even at a depth of around ten meters.
Actually, I already have a deep diving certification, so I can dive to a depth of 30 meters. It is said that divers can enjoy over 90 percent of diving spots if they have the certification.
Since manta rays spend their daytime in shallow water, I could see them even at a depth of around ten meters.
l am a member of a scuba diving club and the club also runs a travel agency, so it provides the members with trips which include scuba diving.
l am a member of a scuba diving club, and the club also runs a travel agency, so it provides the members with trips that include scuba diving.
関連単語
- a newly opened coffee shop（新しくオープンした喫茶店）
- suggestion（提案）
- routine（決められた方法、繰り返されるもの、所定の、定められた通りの）
- at least（少なくとも）
- ~and so on（〜など）
- grab a snack（軽食をつまむ）
- bit（少しだけ）
- cut back（減らす）
- get used to（慣れる）
- sounds good!（いいね！）
- ought to~（～をするべきだ）
- rest my brain（頭を休める）
関連フレーズ
- I'm not familiar with it, but I'm willing to learn more about it!（私は馴染みがありませんが、もっと知りたいと思っています!）
- It is necessary for me to address this situation, or else nothing will change.（私がこの状況に対処しなければ、何も変わらない。）
- I like tea rather than coffee.（コーヒーよりお茶が好きです。）
- I'm becoming addicted to this artist.（このアーティストにハマりつつあります。）
- Do you have enough free time to teach them a little about what needs to be done?（やるべきことを少しでも教えてあげられるだけの自由な時間はありますか？）
- We don't we take a little breather and get back to in later on?（少し息抜きをして、また後で再開しませんか？）
- I'm curious about what would compel someone to do something like that?（気になるのは、何が原因でそんなことをしなければならないのかということです。）
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