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ポイントカードを持っているかどうか聞こう

Let's ask the customer if they have their point card
あなたはお客様にポイントカードを持っているかどうか聞いています。
英語でも当たり前のように聞けるようにしましょう。お客様が持っていない場合に備えて、ポイントカードのメリット等もあわせて英文で覚えておくと便利でしょう。
I'll take this one.
 
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I'll take this one.

Thank you very much. Do you have a point card in our shop? If no, I recommend you enroll in our point card today. You can deposit 5 points per 100 JPY. 1 point can be used as 1 JPY. So, if you buy 10,000 JPY, you can get 500 points, and you can reduce 500 JPY from total amount next time.

自然な表現

Thank you very much. Do you have a point card in our shop? If no, I recommend you enroll in our point card today. You can earn 5 points per 100 JPY. 1 point can be used as 1 JPY. So, if you buy 10,000 JPY, you can get 500 points, and you can deduct 500 JPY from total amount next time.

1. In this context, the points are "earned" and not deposited since they can get or earn points when they buy something.
2. We use "reduce" when we are talking about the total amount. When we are talking about the amount to be lessened, we use "deduct."
It seems like a really reasonable offer, I am going to definitely enroll. Does it have any more perks?

Yes, I believe that it is a beneficial offer for you. On top of that, we additionally offer 20% discount in your birthday month. If you would like to buy something expensive, this discount should be very attractive. Of course, you do not need to pay any annual fees for this point card.

自然な表現

Yes, I believe that it is a beneficial offer for you. On top of that, we additionally offer a 20% discount in your birthday month. If you would like to buy something expensive, this discount should be very attractive. Of course, you do not need to pay any annual fees for this point card.

1. Use an indefinite article (a) to refer to a singular and general noun/noun syntax which starts with a consonant sound.
Really? That sounds like such a great offer. Is there any waiting period because I am already in my birthday month. Can I benefit immediately from the 20% discount?

I am very sorry that the 20% discount can be only applicable once a year for your birthday month. However, if I try to advice you something just between you and me, we do not check when your birthday is based on your ID card or driver's license. So, you can pretend this month is your birthday month in order to get the 20% discount immediately.

自然な表現

I am very sorry that the 20% discount can be only applicable once a year for your birthday month. However, just between you and me, we do not check when your birthday is based on your ID card or driver's license, so you can pretend this month is your birthday month in order to get the 20% discount immediately.

1. Remove “the previous phrase" as the sentence works perfectly well without it. This also makes the sentence more direct and less wordy.
2. We try as much as possible to avoid using the coordinating conjunction “so” at the start of a sentence. Connecting it to the preceding sentence and changing the period to a comma is an alternative to that. You can start a sentence with "so" if it is an introductory word and if it is used as an expression to start a conversation.

EXCELLENT writing skills! Enjoy your Skype lesson! ^_^

関連単語

  • bring（持ってくる）
  • point card（ポイントカード）
  • have（持っている）
  • save（貯める）
  • useable（用いることができる）

関連フレーズ

  • How many points do I have?（何ポイント貯まっていますか？）
  • I would like to save up the points.（ポイントを貯めます。）
  • This card can't be used here.（このカードはこちらではご利用いただけません。）
  • Would you like to use your points?（ポイントをご利用になられますか？）
  • What can I do with my points?（ポイントで何ができますか？）

こんな方にオススメ

  • ビジネス
  • 初級
  • 接客業/物販
  • 接客業/飲食店
  • 会計