試着したお客様に気に入ったかどうか聞いてみよう

Asking the customer how they like the clothes they recently tried on.
あなたは試着したお客様に気に入ったかどうか聞いてみよう。
試着し終わったお客様に対して、気に入ったかどうか聞いてみましょう。もしサイズが合わない場合は、別のを持ってくるかどうかも聞いてみるといいでしょう。
How do I look?
 
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How do I look?

You look really good. This shirt suits you very much. Would you like to try on different colors such as blue, black, orange or purple? We are now on summer sale and you can get a 20% discount. If you buy two shirts, you can get one shirt for free. Please don’t miss this opportunity.

自然な表現

You look really good. This shirt suits you very much. Would you like to try on different colors such as blue, black, orange or purple? We are now in summer sale and you can get a 20% discount. If you buy two shirts, you can get one shirt for free. Please don’t miss this opportunity.

1. When indicating sales as locations, we should use "in" as the preposition. If you said that you're "on sale" it means that you would be sold alongside the products.
I appreciate the complement? Do I really look good on this shirt? That's a great deal, but do you have a light brown color?

Yes, it suits you very much. All right, please let me bring a light brown one for you. Please hold on for a couple of minutes. Here you are. There is a fitting room over there. If you would like to try on, please use there. Trousers are also on sale now. Are you interested in buying a pair of trousers as well?

自然な表現

Yes, it suits you very much. All right, please let me bring a light brown one for you. Please hold on for a couple of minutes. Here you are. There is a fitting room over there. If you would like to try the dress on, please use it. Trousers are also on sale now. Are you interested in buying a pair of trousers as well?

1. The verb "to try on" is transitive and as such requires an object.
2. "There" is an adverb and adverbs can't be objects of sentences. instead, we can use a noun or a pronoun.
As a matter of fact, this doesn't seem to be what I originally had in mind.
Coyote brown would be a much better option.

Oh, really? I think it suits you very much. However, if you do not like it, let me bring other options for you. Could you please tell me what the Coyote brown is? I have never heard of that color. I would like to look for a color which is similar to the color you like.

自然な表現

Oh, really? I think it suits you very much. However, if you do not like it, let me bring other options for you. Could you please tell me what _ Coyote brown is? I have never heard of that color. I would like to look for a color which is similar to the color you like.

1. Colors almost never require determiners.

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  • fitting room(試着室 )
  • mirror(鏡)
  • cover over a face(フェイスカバー)
  • nice(素敵な)
  • try(試す)
  • How do you like it?(お気に召しましたか?)
  • Are you all right?(いかがですか?)
  • How nice!(素敵ですよ。)
  • It goes with almost anything.(とても合わせやすいですよ。)
  • This design is in style now.(このデザインが今流行なんですよ。)

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