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Recommending a product to the customer.
あなたはお客様におすすめの商品を案内しています。
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What do you recommend the most?
 
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What do you recommend the most?

Have you ever tried thermal underwear? This product has the function of generating heat from your body and is a seasonal tradition in winter. Many tourists from cold regions buy in bulk as a souvenir. If you came from tropical or warm places, how about cool touch fabric underwear?

自然な表現

Have you ever tried thermal underwear? This product has the function of generating heat from your body and is a seasonal tradition in winter. Many tourists from cold regions buy in bulk as a souvenir. If you come from tropical or warm places, how about cool touch fabric underwear?

1. The present simple tense should be used to indicate truth or general information. The customer's past action (came) is irrelevant in this context.
I haven't tried thermal underwear before, but it sounds like a practical solution for staying warm in colder climates. Have you personally found it effective, especially considering its popularity among tourists from cold regions?

Yes, I have and felt it was so effective, but such thermal fabric makes my skin itch and flake because it takes moisture from my skin and gets on my clothes. If you also have sensitive skin like a precious baby, a sweater with merino wool is a better option. It warms the body so well that maintainers love it, and the smooth and natural material will be gentle on your skin.

自然な表現

Yes, I have tried it and found it very effective, but the thermal fabric makes my skin itch and flake because it wicks moisture away from my skin and onto my clothes. If you also have sensitive skin like a newborn baby, a merino wool sweater would be a better option. It warms the body so well that outdoor enthusiasts love it, and the smooth and natural material is gentle on your skin.

1. 3. I rephrased this to make it more clear-cut and natural-sounding.
2. Opt for "the" when referring to something specific or mentioned before. In this case, you are talking about a specific product.
4. If you are talking about the (skin) condition, not the position or degree of something, then the word "newborn" would be a better fit.
5. I rearranged the word order for a more natural speech flow.
6. "Would be" is more appropriate as you intend to give your recommendation politely.
7. I wonder if you meant to spell the word "mountaineers", the word "maintainers" does not seem to fit the context here. I suggested something neutral for now.
8. The present simple tense should be used to indicate truth or general information. The context is not about future transformation (will be).
That's helpful to know, thank you! Could you recommend a specific brand or type of merino wool sweater that you've found particularly comfortable for sensitive skin?

You can choose your favorite type of wool based on your preferences, purpose, or budget. Merino wool has several highly functional features. The most important benefits of merino wool are that it doesn't retain odor when you sweat and still provides warmth even when wet. Additionally, extrafine merino wool has finer fibers, making it softer to the touch.

自然な表現

You can choose your favorite type of wool based on your preferences, purpose, or budget. Merino wool has several exceptional features. The most important benefits of merino wool are that it doesn't retain odor when you sweat and still provides warmth even when wet. Additionally, extra fine merino wool has finer fibers, making it softer to the touch.

1. I suggested a more appropriate option to minimize redundancy.
2. Spell Check.
  • recommend(勧める)
  • limited edition(期間限定)
  • design(デザイン)
  • standard(基準、標準)
  • silhouette(シルエット)
  • How do you like it?(お気に召しましたか?)
  • It just came in yesterday.(昨日入ってきたばかりです。)
  • It won't go out of style(流行に左右されません。)
  • It looks really good on you.(あなたにとても似合っています。)
  • I am sure that it is comfortable to wear.(絶対に着心地が良いですよ。)

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