店の外から覗いているお客様に声をかけてみよう

Speaking to a customer who is outside the shop looking in.
あなたは店の外から覗いているお客様に声をかけます。
店に入らずに外からお店の様子を覗いているお客様もいるかもしれません。そのような時、優しく声をかけ緊張感をなくしてあげることで、お客様の足も店内に向くことでしょう。
I wonder what kind of products are in this shop.
 
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I wonder what kind of product is in this shop.

Hello. We have different kinds of chocolates. Come in and have a look, please. It's so close inside.

自然な表現

Hello. We have different kinds of chocolates. Come in and have a look, please. It's so cramped inside.

1. The adjective "cramped" means "uncomfortably small or restricted".
I love chocolates! That is perfect. Do you have available dark chocolates now? What kind of chocolate is your bestseller?

Well, as for dark chocolate, we have several ones, which are different in terms of the balance of cacao. The most popular one is the dark one of 75 percent of cacao, which is, I think, the best formulation with cacao and milk.

自然な表現

Well, as for dark chocolate, we have several ones, which are different in terms of the balance of cacao. The most popular one is the dark one with 75 percent of cacao, which is, I think, the best formulation of cacao and milk.

1. Use the preposition "with" to denote having or including something.
2. The preposition "of" is used to show possession, belonging, or origin.
Oh, I would want to try that 75% cacao. Do you have anything higher than that? I think there are available 85% and 90% dark chocolate in the market, right?

We have chocolates up to 90 percent. The most popular one is, as I said, the 75 percent one, but actually, some customers repeatedly buy 90 percent chocolate, and they are addicted to it. We have samples of 75 and 90 percent chocolate, and would you like to try them?

自然な表現

We have chocolates up to 90 percent. The most popular one is, as I said, the 75 percent one, but actually, some customers repeatedly buy the 90 percent chocolate, and they are addicted to it. We have samples of 75 and 90 percent chocolate.    Would you like to try them?

1. Use the definite article when referring to something specific or unique.
2. You should end the sentence here.
3. No need for this conjunction anymore, it's redundant.
Definitely! Are there chocolates lower than 75% cacao? If so, I would like to try them as well so I can compare.

Okay. I'll prepare 40 50, and 60 percent each. Here you are. I recommend you try from ordinary 50 percent.

自然な表現

Okay. I'll prepare 40, 50, and 60 percent each. Here you are. I recommend you try the ordinary one with 50 percent.

1. Use a comma when listing numbers.
2. This is a better phrase to use in this context.
Hmmm... I think I like the ones with a higher percentage but I think I'll buy some for my roommate to try. Can I have a bar of each of these?

Sure. Thank you for your purchase. Would you like us to wrap them? How would you like to pay them?

自然な表現

Sure. Thank you for your purchase. Would you like us to wrap them? How would you like to pay for them?

1. The preposition "for" is used to denote "(getting) in exchange".
  • take a peek into a shop(店を覗く)
  • window shopping(ウィンドウショッピング)
  • wait and see(成り行きを見守る、様子を見る)
  • come in(中に入る)
  • feel free to do(気軽に〜する)
  • Please let me know if you need any help.(何かありましたら、ご連絡ください。)
  • Are you window shopping?(ウィンドウショッピングをしているのですか?)
  • Don't just take a peek, please come in!(覗くだけではなく、ぜひお入りください。)
  • Why don't you come in?(どうぞお入りください。)
  • Please feel free to stop by.(気軽にお立ち寄りください。)

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