店に来てくれたお客様にあいさつしよう

Let's greet the customer who comes to the store.
あなたは店に来てくれたお客様に挨拶をしています。
英語には日本語の「いらっしゃいませ」と同じ表現を含む言葉は存在しませんが、代わりに日常で使われる挨拶言葉を使うとよいでしょう。
Hello.
 
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Hello.

Hello.
Do you visit our shop for the first time?
This shop is a suuvenir shop.
What are you looking for?

自然な表現

Hello.
Is this your first time visiting our shop?
This shop is a souvenir shop.
What are you looking for?

1. Correct way of asking this question.
2. Spelling with "ou".
Yes, it's my first time visiting your shop. I'm looking for a unique souvenir to remember my trip. Do you have any recommendations for popular items?

Yes, we have recommendations for popular items.
For example, Utiwas, cups, passport case and cloths.
Many forein costomers buy them.
They are painted beautiful japanese land scape.

自然な表現

Yes, we have recommendations for popular items, for example, Utiwas, cups, passport case and cloths.
Many forein customers buy them.
They are painted with a beautiful Japanese landscape.

1. Combine these sentences as the second one has no subject or verb to create a sentence.
2. Spellingw ith "u".
3. "with" as the preposition to show what is has.
4. "a" to show singularity of "landscape".
5. Use a capital letter for a name.
6. Spelling as one word.
I especially like the idea of items featuring beautiful Japanese landscapes. Do you have any specific items that are particularly popular among customers, or perhaps a best-seller? Also, are these items handmade or produced in larger quantities?

Yes, we have best-seller items.
Our shop's best-seller is cups.
Because they use them daily.
And this design is best.
They are produced in quantities.
But famous professional painter design them.

自然な表現

Yes, we have best-seller items.
Our shop's best-seller is cups because they use them daily and this design is the best.
They are produced in quantities, but a famous professional painter designed them.

1,2. "because" and "and" are coordinating conjunctions used to combine sentences, not start new ones.
3. "the: is used with superlative adjectives.
4. "but" as the conjunction to combine the sentences.
5. "a" to show singularity of "painter".
6. Use the past tense as it already happened.
That sounds wonderful! I can see why they’re so popular if they combine both practicality and a unique design by a professional painter. Are there any specific patterns or themes that the painter is known for? Please tell me more about it.

.The painter is Mr.Nishino.
He paints yamatoe.
It is traditional Japanese painting from
about 1000 years ago.
Yamatoe is such as nature.
I was also impressed the painting.

自然な表現

The painter is Mr. Nishino.
He paints yamatoe, which is a traditional Japanese painting from about 1000 years ago.
Yamatoe is such natural.
I was also impressed by the painting.

1. Use "which" to show a relative clause to keep the information in the same sentence for a natural flow.
2. "a" to show singularity of "painting".
3. "natural" as the adjective to describe the style.
4. "by" as the preposition to show what impressed you.
It's fascinating to learn about Mr. Nishino and his work with yamatoe! Traditional Japanese painting has such a rich history, and the focus on nature makes it even more captivating. I will buy your bestseller cup painted by him. How much is it?

Thank you for buying it.
It is 3500 yen for including tax.
But It is sale time.
If you buy 2000 yen over, you can buy 10%discount.
So It is 3150 yen.

自然な表現

Thank you for buying it.
It is 3500 yen for including tax, but it is sale time.
If you buy 2000 yen over, you can get a 10% discount, so it is 3150 yen.

1. "but" is a coordinating conjunction used to combine sentences.
2. No capital letter unless it starts a new sentence.
3. "get" as the verb to show what you receive.
4. "a" to show singularity of "discount".
5. "so" is a coordinating conjunction used to combine sentences.
6. No capital letter unless it starts a new sentence.
*For this paragrpah, alternatively, you can say "I appreciate you choosing this one. The price is 3500 yen, including tax, but if you purchase an extra 2000 yen, then you will receive a 10% discount.".
  • listen to~(~を聞く)
  • customer(顧客)
  • greet (挨拶する)
  • Welcome(ようこそ)
  • May I help you?(何かお探しですか?)
  • Thank you for coming today.(ご来店ありがとうございます。)
  • How is it going?(調子はどうですか?)
  • We are on sale.(ただいまセール中です。)
  • You can try it on if you like.(試着もできますよ。)
  • Please let me know if you need any help.(何かありましたら、ご連絡ください。)

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