英文履歴書を添削してもらおう

Let's talk about your resume
英文の履歴書を添削してもらいましょう。
英文で履歴書を作成する必要がある方にご活用いただけるレッスンです。履歴書は提出先の企業に対してあなたという人物をPRするとても大切な書類です。相手に誤解を与えることがないように、文章だけでなく細かな単語に至るまで確認しておきましょう。
Please write your resume you want to correct.
 
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Please write your resume you want to correct.

Ryodai has 6 years of experience in management consulting and M&A advisory. Prior to SBI Ven Capital, Ryodai was a Manager at Nomura Research Institute Singapore which is an Asia-focused firm specialized in management consulting and M&A advisory. He was mainly involved in buy-side / acquisition projects to assist companies find acquisition targets and strategic projects in various industries, including logistics, energy(Carbon Neutrality), infrastructure(Smart City), on the development of expansion strategies in Asia. He began his career in financial sector team of EY Japan.
Ryodai holds a Bachelor of Social Policy and Administration from Hosei University.

自然な表現

Ryodai has 6 years of experience in management consulting and M&A advisory. Prior to SBI Ven Capital, Ryodai was a Manager at Nomura Research Institute Singapore, which is an Asia-focused firm specializing in management consulting and M&A advisory. He was mainly involved in buy-side or acquisition projects to assist companies to find acquisition targets and strategic projects in various industries, including logistics, energy(Carbon Neutrality), infrastructure(Smart City), on the development of expansion strategies in Asia. He began his career in the financial sector team of EY Japan.
Ryodai holds a Bachelor of Social Policy and Administration from Hosei University.

1. Put a comma after a pause to avoid misreading.
2. Use the 'ing' form' to express continuous action.
3. Use actual text in formal writing.
4. Use this preposition to express an intention.
5. Use a definite article when talking about something specific.
I see what you mean. However, would you please be so kind as to tell me what do you do in your spare time?

tks

自然な表現

I enjoy video games in my free time. Thank you for asking.

1. Use full sentences in your responses.
You're welcome. Don't mention it, that's what I am here for.

Is there anything else that you would like to add to your resume or about yourself?

No

自然な表現

That is all. Thank you.

1. Use full sentences in your responses.
  • manage(管理する)
  • consult(意見を聞く)
  • instruct(指示する、教える)
  • evaluate(評価する)
  • draft(下書きを作成する)
  • I tended to the needs and opinions of potential clients.(お客様のニーズや意見に耳を傾けました。)
  • I managed a team of 20 staff personnel. (20名のスタッフを管理しました。)
  • I served as a lecturer on risk management for all employees.(リスクマネジメントに関する講義の講師を務めた。)
  • I evaluated the performance of new products.(新製品の性能を評価しました。)
  • I drafted a proposal for a new project.(新しいプロジェクトの企画書を作成しました。)

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