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英文の履歴書を添削してもらいましょう。
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Please write your resume you want to correct.
 
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Please write your resume you want to correct.

My skills: Arranging meetings, appointments, and travel
Preparing agendas and minutes for meetings
Improving efficiency utilizing IoT
Following up on action items in a timely manner
Building good relationships with colleagues
Being an efficient multitasker
Possessing a tenacious spirit
Putting the best effort to meet the Project lead' needs

自然な表現

My skills: Arranging meetings, appointments, and travel
Preparing agendas and minutes for meetings
Improving efficiency utilizing IoT
Following up on action items in a timely manner
Building good relationships with colleagues
Being an efficient multitasker
Possessing a tenacious spirit
Putting the best effort into meeting    projects' lead needs.

1. You may also use ''promptly''.
2. Use ''into'' to indicate where one puts effort.
3. Use the gerund to introduce the object of the preposition ''into''.
4. ''the'' is not necessary.
5. Use lowercase as it is a common noun, a plural noun for general references and an apostrophe to indicate belonging to something.
6. The apostrophe is not necessary.
7. Use a full stop to end the list.
Your skills are well-rounded and valuable. For added impact, including specific achievements or examples can help illustrate your effectiveness. For instance, how have you used your multitasking skills or IoT knowledge to achieve notable results? Do you have any particular success stories to share?

I have engaged in various assistant duties with over 12 years of experience. I was an Executive Assistant at PricewaterhouseCoopers AARATA with over two years' administrative experience.
Personal Skills: Possessing strong perceptible problem-solving and prioritization skills. Able to work under pressure; able to meet deadlines.
I always try to be positive and think "I can do it. How can I complete this task?". Firstly, when I face a challenging situation, I will list some possible ideas or ways to solve the issue. Sometimes, I will ask my supervisor if my solution to a problem is a good policy.

自然な表現

I have engaged in various assistant duties with over 12 years of experience. I was an executive assistant at PricewaterhouseCoopers AARATA and gained over two years of administrative experience.
Personal Skills: Possessing strong perceptible problem-solving and prioritization skills. Able to work under pressure; able to meet deadlines.
I always try to be positive and think "I can do it. How can I complete this task?". Firstly, when I face a challenging situation, I    list some possible ideas or ways to solve the issue. Sometimes, I    ask my supervisor if my solution to a problem is a good policy.

1. & 2. Use lowercase on the initial letters of common nouns.
3. Use ''and gained'' to introduce the experience you got from there.
4. The apostrophe is unnecessary.
5. Use ''of'' to indicate relating to something.
6. & 7. The modal verb is not necessary.
Are there any recent projects or accomplishments you'd like to include that showcase your abilities and successes?

I worked hard to prepare and organize 3-4 conferences and events simultaneously, collaborating with the marketing department at the Austrian headquarters via email and chat. Although I worked in a time zone difference, my task control and multi-tasking management skills ensured that everything was completed on time and the event was a success.

自然な表現

I worked hard to prepare and organize 3-4 conferences and events simultaneously, collaborating with the marketing department at the Austrian headquarters via email and chat. Although I worked in a time zone difference, my task control and multi-tasking management skills ensured that everything was completed on time and the event was a success.

1. You may also write the numbers in words. ''three to four''.
  • manage(管理する)
  • consult(意見を聞く)
  • instruct(指示する、教える)
  • evaluate(評価する)
  • draft(下書きを作成する)
  • I tended to the needs and opinions of potential clients.(お客様のニーズや意見に耳を傾けました。)
  • I managed a team of 20 staff personnel. (20名のスタッフを管理しました。)
  • I served as a lecturer on risk management for all employees.(リスクマネジメントに関する講義の講師を務めた。)
  • I evaluated the performance of new products.(新製品の性能を評価しました。)
  • I drafted a proposal for a new project.(新しいプロジェクトの企画書を作成しました。)

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