お客様にお土産を買える近くの店を案内しよう

Telling a guest where the nearest souvenir shop is.
あなたはお客様にお土産を買える近くの店を案内しています。
ただ近くの土産店をお伝えするだけではなく、お客様の希望する商品を扱っている土産店をご案内するとより親切な対応になるでしょう。
Where is the nearest souvenir shop?
 
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Where is the nearest souvenir shop?

It is our great pleasure to assist you. The nearest souvenir shop is located five minutes away from here on foot. It is a specialized Japanese sweets shop where you can buy traditional Japanese confectionaries. If you would like to buy something else, I will tell you other shops. What would you like to buy?

自然な表現

It is our great pleasure to assist you. The nearest souvenir shop is located five minutes away from here on foot. It is a specialized Japanese sweets shop where you can buy traditional Japanese confectionaries. If you want to buy something else, I will tell you about other shops. What would you like to buy?

1.In a situation like this we use 1st conditional.
 *The first conditional is a structure used for talking about possibilities in the present or in the future. It's consisted of two parts: if clause and main clause (IF + subject + verb in present tense, Subject + will + verb)
 *The second conditional expresses unreal situations in the present or future. The Second Conditional sentence consists of two clauses, an "if" clause and a main clause. (If + subject + verb in the past simple tense, Subject + would + verb)
2. preposition missing (tell (someone) + about (something)); Explain further.
That's exactly what I was looking for.
Are there any particular traditional Japanese confectionaries that you would recommend?

The traditional Japanese confectionary which I would recommend you is Dorayaki. Dorayaki is a type of Japanese confectionary, a red-bean pancake which consists of two small pancake-like patties made from castella wrapped around a filling of sweet red bean paste. Does it sound good for you?

自然な表現

The traditional Japanese confectionary which I would recommend to you is Dorayaki. Dorayaki is a type of Japanese confectionary, a red-bean pancake which consists of two small pancake-like patties made from castella wrapped around a filling of sweet red bean paste. Does it sound good for you?

1. recommend (something) + TO (someone)
Yes, as a matter of fact, it does.
However, I was looking for something much more compact and stylish.
I am interested in some wagashi assortments.

Oh, I understand that you are interested in a much more compact and stylish one. Kyoto is very famous for wagashi assortments. Unfortunately, it is not something which is very popular in Tokyo. However, there should be some wagashi assignment shops in Tokyo as well. Please let me check where you can buy them in Tokyo.

自然な表現

Oh, I see. Kyoto is known for what you're looking for, but I'm sure we can find a place in Tokyo where you can buy wagashi treats. Could you wait for a bit while I check? 

another example of your original reply
  • souvenir(お土産)
  • recommend(おすすめする)
  • popular(人気のある)
  • tax-free shop(免税店)
  • How about~?(〜はいかがですか?)
  • What would you like to get?(お目当てのモノは何ですか?)
  • The souvenir shop is located in the station.(お土産店は駅の中にございます。)
  • Please turn to the right at the second traffic light.(2つ目の信号を右折してください。)
  • This shop is very popular among foreign visitors.(このお店は外国人観光客に大変人気があります。)
  • I hope you will find what you want.(お客様の欲しいモノが見つかる事をお祈りしています。)

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  • ビジネス
  • 初級
  • ホテル業界
  • コンシェルジュ業務