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会社の説明をしてみよう

Talking about your company
自分の会社の専門分野、特徴に関して会話を進めていくことは勿論のこと、海外の会社と日本の会社システム(部署や営業時間、休み等)の違い等も前もって分かっていると会話も弾むことでしょう。
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What company do you work for?
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What company do you work for?

I am work in web develop company.
I resposible for programming to web app and web site.
I like my company becouse I can remote work if I want.
And I can shchduleing to my work myself.
But I have to keep study web technorogy.
It is too hard. becouse web technorogy revolution speed it to fast.
And It need english skill.
So, I hope kill up my english.
best regurd.

自然な表現

I am working in a web development company.
I am responsible for programming a web app and maintaining the website.
I like my company because I can work remotely if I want to and I can schedule _ my work myself but I have to keep studying web technology.
It is too hard because web technology keeps evolving constantly and I need English skills too.
So, I hope to brush up on my English.
Best regards.

1.17. The Present Continuous form is required here since the action isn't finished yet.
2.6. You need to put an indefinite article in front of a singular countable noun.
3. You need a noun here, not a verb.
4. You missed a verb here so I added it.
5.8.9.14.18.19.20.23.27. Spelling check.
7. I added these words to improve the structure of the sentence.
10. This word order makes more sense.
11. You need an adverb here, not an adjective.
12. You missed a preposition here.
13.16.22. Avoid starting sentences with conjunctions. It doesn't sound natural and is grammatically incorrect.
15. There is no need for a preposition here.
21.26. I changed the phrase here to a proper form.
24. A capitalized first letter is required here.
25. I added "too" to improve the structure of the sentence.
That is an awesome job. Working remotely can give you enough time to study more web site programming. For how long have you done this job?

I have been working at current job for a year and 6 month.
My depertment is a start up in company.
It started two yaers ago.

自然な表現

I have been working at the current job for a year and 6 months.
My department is a start-up in company.
It started two years ago.

1. A definite article is needed here since you're referring to a specific term.
2. Since the number you're mentioning is 2 you need to put the noun in its plural form.
3.5. Spelling check.
4. A hyphen is required in this case.
That is awesome. How do you apply English skills in your day to day work at the company and how often do you practice it to learn more?

First, reading document witten by english.
Question in english at web site like stack overflow.
Write comment about programming code.
Some time attend conference in english.

自然な表現

First, reading the documents written in English.
Second, doing the Q&A section from time to time.
Third, writing comments about the programming code.
Sometimes I even attend a conference in English.

1.10. A definite article is needed here since you're referring to a specific term.
2. A plural form of the noun is required here since you're reading multiple documents.
3.11. Spelling check.
4. The right preposition here is "in".
5.15. A capitalized first letter is required here.
6. Not sure what you meant by this. I offered an alternative sentence you can use in this case.
7. I added an ordinal number here to improve the structure of the sentence.
8. An -ing form of the verb is required here since you're listing the activities you're doing in general.
9. A plural form is required here.
12. You missed an object here so I added it.
13. I added a word since it is common in this case.
14. You need to put an indefinite article in front of a singular countable noun.
I see. Do you have any other person that assists you at work while you study or it is a sole business?

No I have not.
So, I lnteresting in online english school.

自然な表現

No, I have not.
So, I am interested in an online English school.

1. A comma is required here.
2. You missed a verb here so I added it.
3. I changed the word here to a proper form.
4. You need to put an indefinite article in front of a singular countable noun.
5. A capitalized first letter is required here.
That is cool. At what time do you start work and how many hours per day do you study and work? Do you hope to get someone else to assist you in website work?

My work start at 9 am.
I work 10 hours per day.
Study 1 hour after work.

Yes, I hope to join coworker to my team.
I think 5 or 6 people in team is good.

自然な表現

My work starts at 9 am.
I work 10 hours per day.
I study for 1 hour after work.

Yes, I hope we'll introduce new people to our team.
I think 5 or 6 people in a team is enough.

1. Be sure to put the verb in the correct form, which is a third-person in this case.
2. You missed a subject here so I added a pronoun.
3. A preposition "for" is required here.
4.5. I made some changes to the sentence to make it better.
6. You need to put an indefinite article in front of a singular countable noun.
7. I altered a phrase a bit, to make it sound more natural.

Have a great video lesson. :-)
  • manufacturer(製造業者、メーカー)
  • manufacture(製造する)
  • salespeople(販売員)
  • sales department(販売部、販売課)
  • colleagues(同僚、仕事仲間)
  • solo work(単独作業)
  • employee(従業員)
  • work as (an engineer)((技師)として働く)
  • work for (chemical manufacturer)(化学メーカーで働く)
  • How long have you been working at your company?(その会社ではもうどれぐらい働いているんですか? )
  • Do you work long hours?(長時間働いているのですか?)
  • Do you often go on business trips overseas?(海外出張へ良く行かれますか?)
  • What do you like most about (your job)?(社内でのあなたの役割はなんですか?)
  • such as ((~などです。))

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