ゲームのルールを説明してみよう

Explaining the rules of a game
あなたは、ゲームのルールについて説明しています。
ゲームは国籍を超えて楽しめるもの。ルールを理解してみんなで楽しんでみましょう!
Can you explain the rules of this game?
 
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Can you explain the rules of this game?

I will explain how to play "Pokemon" which is an abbreviation of "Pocket Monster". That game is to raise pokemon and it's very interesting. Moreover we can exchange pokemon and battle each other. My favorite reason are I like raising pokemon and raised pokemon has lot of characteristic by each trainer. I think pokemon is the best RPG in the world.

自然な表現

I will explain how to play "Pokemon" which is an abbreviation of "Pocket Monster". That game is to raise pokemon and it's very interesting. Moreover, we can exchange Pokemon and battle each other. My favorite reason is I like raising pokemon and raised pokemon has a lot of characteristics by each trainer. I think Pokemon is the best RPG in the world.

1. Put a comma after an introductory word
2 & 6 Capitalize the proper name
3. The singular subject 'reason' should take a singular verb too
4. A quantifier before a noun or prepositional phrase is most often paired with an indefinite article or no article. Remember that a and an are used to mean one or a non-specific one of many. Omit articles with quantifiers that are countable and plural.
5. a lot of + plural noun
I k now the game is very popular across the world. I don't know how it's played though. Please tell me more about it.

In the world where Pokemon live, a player makes Pokemon your partner. It depicts the adventures of "Pokemon Trainers" who battle between Pokemon.
A player becomes a Pokemon trainer and goes on a journey, and fight a lot of other Pokemon trainers. Then, a player collects gym badges to qualify for the Pokemon League. Ultimately, a player aims to become the champion of Pokemon Trainer. In addition, a player has the purpose of catching many types of Pokemon and aiming to complete the Pokedex. The story revolves around the legendary Pokemon and organizations that want to harness its power.

自然な表現

In the world where Pokemon live, a player makes Pokemon your partner. It depicts the adventures of "Pokemon Trainers" who battle between Pokemon.
A player becomes a Pokemon trainer and goes on a journey, and fight a lot of other Pokemon trainers. Then, a player collects gym badges to qualify for the Pokemon League. Ultimately, a player aims to become the champion of Pokemon Trainer. In addition, a player has the purpose of catching and training many types of Pokemon and aiming to complete the Pokedex. The story revolves around the legendary Pokemon and organizations that want to harness its power.

1. No errors here; this is just an additional detail you could add here.
Okay, that is an interesting backstory. I didn't know that the competition has so many levels to it. One would need to be really good in order to win. Please continue.

Exactly. There are various types in Pokemon and the techniques that Pokemon can learn. Depending on the type of the opponent and the type of technique, they may cause great damage, on the contrary, the damage may be reduce.
By fighting the opponent, they level up and become stronger. They change their appearance by "evolving" by growing or satisfying certain condition. And the evolved Pokemon will dramatically improve its abilities.

自然な表現

Exactly. There are various types of Pokemon and    techniques that Pokemon can learn. Depending on the type of the opponent and the type of technique, they may cause great damage, on the contrary, the damage may be reduced.
By fighting the opponent, they level up and become stronger. They change their appearance by "evolving" by growing or satisfying a certain condition. And the evolved Pokemon will dramatically improve its abilities.

1. type + OF + something
2. You are referring to techniques' in a general sense, so a definite article is not required here
3. be + past participle
4. A singular noun 'condition' takes an indefinite article
Okay, that's interesting. I am now eager to play this game. Given how competitive it sounds, it could take long for me to become a professional player. Please tell me more about the features of this game.

This game is a game that even children can play. Anyone can enjoy it. By using Internet communication, you can connect with users not only in Japan but also overseas. The circle of friends spreads all over the world with Pokemon.

自然な表現

This game is a game that even children can play. Anyone can enjoy it. By using Internet communication, you can connect with users not only in Japan but also overseas. Your circle of friends spreads all over the world with Pokemon.

1. It would sound more natural if you use possessive adjective/determiner in this context
  • concept(構想、コンセプト)
  • strategy(ストラテジー、策略)
  • detail(詳細)
  • experience(経験、体験)
  • instruction(説明書)
  • When I'm feeling overwhelmed, I just take things step by step.(私は圧倒されそうになったとき、物事を一歩一歩進めていきます。)
  • Please watch me do it first.(最初に私がやるのを見てください。)
  • You have to have a strategy in order to win.(勝つためには戦略が必要です。)
  • It's your turn.(あなたの番です。)
  • I hope you have fun on your trip!(旅行を楽しんできてくださいね。)

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