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Explaining the rules of a game
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Can you explain the rules of this game?
 
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Can you explain the rules of this game?

One of my all time favourites is a game called ULTRAKILL. It's a movement shooter, similar to doom, I'm sure you have atleast heard of this game before. It has a lot of different and hidden mechanics that you can uncover while playing through the game normally. Though, for some things you might need to get out of your way to look them up. It has great character design, music and story. Story of ULTRAKILL is really interesting and not fully discovered, only the clues in-game. Overall a great game with lots of content to explore.

自然な表現

One of my all-time favourites is a game called ULTRAKILL. It's a movement shooter, similar to Doom. I'm sure you have at least heard of this game before. It has a lot of different and hidden mechanics that you can uncover while playing through the game normally. Though for some things, you might need to get out of your way to look them up. It has great character design, music, and story. The story of ULTRAKILL is really interesting and not fully discovered, only the clues in-game. Overall, a great game with lots of content to explore.

1. & 4. Correct spelling.
2. The name of something is a proper noun, and we spell it with an upper-case letter.
3. Finish a declarative sentence with a full stop.
5. No need for a comma here, it's the same clause in the sentence.
6. Use a comma to make a pause in the sentence and separate the two parts of the sentence.
7. Use a comma when listing nouns, even before the conjunction "and".
8. Use the definite article when referring to something specific or unique.
9. Use a comma after introductory phrases.
ULTRAKILL is such a rush, honestly. I love the way you described it. In that case, which layer of the campaign has been your favorite so far? Do you usually go for those stylish S-ranks, or just play for fun?

The game is based on the story: Dante's inferno, hence the levels being in the layers of hell. There is a lore reason why, but I won't get in depth. My favourite layer thus far is probably the last one currently in the game, that being: violence. It gets truly challenging. The music is great and the buildup to the final level is truly exciting. There also way harder levels known as the prime sanctums and encores. These are aditional content and are ULTRA-difficult. Oh, I go for those P-ranks (perfect ranks). They are requiered to fully complete the game.

自然な表現

The game is based on a story: Dante's Inferno, hence the levels being in the layers of hell. There is a lore reason why, but I won't get into it in depth. My favourite layer thus far is probably the last one currently in the game, that being: violence. It gets truly challenging. The music is great, and the buildup to the final level is truly exciting. There are also way harder levels known as the prime sanctums and encores. These are additional content and are ultra-difficult. Oh, I go for those P-ranks (perfect ranks). They are required to fully complete the game.

1. You need the indefinite article "a" when referring to a non-specific, singular noun mentioned for the first time.
2. The name of something is a proper noun, and we spell it with an upper-case letter.
3. Use this phrase to clarify the statement.
4. You need a comma before the conjunction "and" because it's followed by an independent clause.
5. The auxiliary verb "to be" is used to say something about a person, thing, or state, to show a permanent or temporary quality, state, job, etc.
6. & 8. Correct spelling.
7. No need for upper-case letters here.
That sounds awesome. Which weapon swap combo feels the most satisfying for you right now? Have you tried speedrunning any stages, even just for fun?

I really like the marksman revolver or the jackhammer. The marksman's altrenate fire throws out a coin which can bo shot to target the nearest enemy and also targeting its weak spot. Coins have a lot of complicated tech alongside it. The jackhammer deals more damage the faster you move. And when hitting a malicious face especially, it is oddly satisfying with the impact frame alongside it. I don't usually speedrun the game, but I sometimes replay it with some kind of a challange. I can consistantly P-rank most of the stages though.

自然な表現

I really like the marksman revolver or the jackhammer. The marksman's alternate fire throws out a coin that can be shot to target the nearest enemy and also target its weak spot. Coins have a lot of complicated tech alongside them. The jackhammer deals more damage the faster you move. Moreover, when hitting a malicious face, especially, it is oddly satisfying with the impact frame alongside it. I don't usually speedrun the game, but I sometimes replay it with some kind of a challenge. I can consistently P-rank most of the stages, though.

1., 3., 8. & 9. Correct spelling.
2. In a defining clause, use the pronoun "that".
4. The preposition "to" is used with an infinitive to express use or purpose.
5. Use the pronoun "them" as the object of a verb or preposition to refer to two or more people or things previously mentioned or easily identified.
6. We never start a sentence with this conjunction, you can use adverbs instead, such as "however" or "moreover".
7. In this context, "especially" is a "parenthetical" and such phrases should have a comma before and after them.
10. The word "though" takes a comma before it when it is at the end of a sentence.
That’s impressive! What kind of self-imposed challenges do you enjoy most? Which enemy gives you the most trouble when going for P-ranks?

I find guttertanks really hard to counter. I only know how to deal with them partially, with the freezeframe's ability to stop rockets in their way. You don't really have a consistant way to regain health from them since they don't have many parryable attacks. Some others that annoy me are the sentries and and virtues. Those are mostly annoying durring the later waves of cybergrind, when there are a lot more threats in a small area, including their radience. These are always the first priority when they appear on the screen.

自然な表現

I find Guttertanks really hard to counter. I only know how to deal with them partially, with the freezeframe's ability to stop rockets in their way. You don't really have a consistent way to regain health from them since they don't have many parryable attacks. Some others that annoy me are the sentries and    virtues. Those are mostly annoying during the later waves of Cyber Grind, when there are a lot more threats in a small area, including their radiance. These are always the first priority when they appear on the screen.

1. The name of something is a proper noun, and we spell it with an upper-case letter.
2., 4., 5. & 6. Correct spelling.
3. No need for this conjunction here, it's redundant.
I see. That makes sense. Do you usually deal with Guttertanks up close or try to burst them down from range? What’s the highest Cyber Grind wave you’ve reached so far?

From long range usually. If I get to near to one it'll use a melee attack that cant be parried, therefore not being the most consistant way to do that. Cybergrind is ULTRA-fun to play if you have some time to spare. It's like a rougelike gauntlet. My highest wave on the standard difficulty is 25, but on the easiest mode is 62, obviously, since it's a lot easier. Durring the wave 25-30 the radient enemies start to appear. I sometimes die to stupid mistakes, which is frustrating enough, but at the end of the day, it is my fault.

自然な表現

From long range, usually. If I get    near to one, it'll use a melee attack that can't be parried, and therefore it's not the most consistent way to do that. Cyber Grind is ultra-fun to play if you have some time to spare. It's like a rougelike gauntlet. My highest wave on the standard difficulty is 25, but on the easiest mode is 62, obviously, since it's a lot easier. During the waves 25-30, the radiant enemies start to appear. I sometimes die because of stupid mistakes, which is frustrating enough, but at the end of the day, it is my fault.

1., 3. & 11. Use a comma to make a pause in the sentence and separate the two parts of the sentence.
2. No need for this preposition here, it's redundant.
4., 6., 7., 9. & 12. Correct spelling.
5. This is a better phrase to use in this context.
8. No need for upper-case letters here.
10. You are talking about more than one wave, so the noun needs to be in the plural form.
13. The phrase "because of" means "on account of; by reason of".
14. This is an alternative expression you can use: "irritating".
  • concept(構想、コンセプト)
  • strategy(ストラテジー、策略)
  • detail(詳細)
  • experience(経験、体験)
  • instruction(説明書)
  • When I'm feeling overwhelmed, I just take things step by step.(私は圧倒されそうになったとき、物事を一歩一歩進めていきます。)
  • Please watch me do it first.(最初に私がやるのを見てください。)
  • You have to have a strategy in order to win.(勝つためには戦略が必要です。)
  • It's your turn.(あなたの番です。)
  • I hope you have fun on your trip!(旅行を楽しんできてくださいね。)

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