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Taiwan have a unified local elections next month. It's a really close match inTaipei.Becaus I'm a politic and economic researcher, so I gathering information and attend seminars , it's so interesting. I think Taiwanese people have more interest about electiong than Japanese people. I've never seen the election event people looking like so excited in Japan. Suthern Taiwan's election situation is stable relatively , but nothern Taiwan will have some change. It least one month , also can say it most turbulent period.
Taiwan will have unified local elections next month. It will be a really close contest inTaipei. Because I'm a political and economic researcher, I gather information and attend seminars, and it's so interesting. I think Taiwanese people have more interest in elections than Japanese people. I've never seen people look so excited at election events in Japan. Southern Taiwan's election situation is relatively stable, but northern Taiwan is likely to see some changes. For at least one month, we can say it will be a very turbulent period.
I think most difference about Taiwanese and Japanese voters is attitude about elections. Taiwanese voters actively to attend elections event and willing to share own thingking with their familier or friends. And there a lot of elections news everyday in Taiwan more than Japan. Major Taiwanese pay attention to elections. In addition Taiwanese candidates are also different from Japan , Taiwanese candidate relatively young , and there're a lot of women because they have quater system.
I think the biggest difference between Taiwanese and Japanese voters is their attitudes toward elections. Taiwanese voters actively attend election events and are willing to share their own thinking with their families and friends. Also, there is a lot of election news every day in Taiwan, more than in Japan. Most Taiwanese people pay attention to elections. In addition, Taiwanese candidates are also different from those in Japan; Taiwanese candidates are relatively young, and there are a lot of women because they have a quota system.
2. The correct expression here is "difference between".
3. The possessive adjective "their" has been added to clarify to whose attitudes you are referring.
4. You are referring to more than one attitude and so should use the plural "attitudes".
5. The correct expression here is "attitudes toward".
6. The word "to" is redundant here and so has been removed.
7. As you are here using "election" as an attributive noun to modify the noun "events", you should use the singular "election".
8. You are referring to more than one election event and so should use the plural "events".
9. The word "are" has been added to provide the missing verb before "willing".
10. The possessive adjective "their" has been added to clarify to whose own thinking you are referring.
11. Please note the correct spelling of "thinking".
12. Please note the correct spelling of "families".
13. They are willing to share their thinking with both families and friends. The conjunction "or" has therefore been changed to "and".
14. You should not start a sentence with a conjunction such as "And", which has therefore been changed to "Also".
15. A comma has been inserted to separate the introductory word from the main clause.
16. The word "is" has been added to provide the verb missing from the clause.
17. As you are here using "election" as an attributive noun to modify the noun "news", you should use the singular "election".
18. The single word "everyday" is an adjective meaning "commonplace"; whereas the two words "every day" are an adverbial phrase meaning "daily" and so are what you need here.
19. A comma has been inserted to separate the main clause from the additional information that follows it.
20. The preposition "in" has been added before "Japan" for grammatical correctness.
21. "Major" has been changed to "Most" to convey your intended meaning.
22. The word "people" has been added to provide the missing noun being modified by the adjective "Taiwanese".
23. A comma has been inserted to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause.
24. The demonstrative "those", referring to candidates, has been added to ensure you are comparing like with like.
25. As at 20 above.
26. There should not be a space before the comma. Also, the comma has been changed to a semicolon to separate the closely related independent clauses either side and to remedy the comma splice in your original wording.
27. You are referring to Taiwanese candidates generally and so should use the plural "candidates".
28. The word "are" has been added to provide the verb missing from the clause.
29. There should not be a space before the comma.
30. The contraction "there're" is rarely used and so has been expanded to "there are" for a more natural expression of this idea.
31. As you are referring to a non-specific quota system, you need the indefinite article "a" here.
32. Please note the correct spelling of "quota".
I think the most important reason for support is influence to own life in unified local elections. It's not important political party relatively , candidates's ability , how long they live there , their past achievements are more important. In addition , I think candidates's marketing and PR ability are also important, some candidates can make good impression to voters. They have to expression they are advanced , smart , friendly and powerful. They have to clean , voters most hate bribe.
I think the most important reason for support is the influence on their own lives in unified local elections. The political party is relatively unimportant; the candidates' abilities, how long they have lived there, and their past achievements are more important. In addition, I think the candidates' marketing and PR skills are also important, so they can make a good impression on the voters. The candidates have to show that they are advanced, smart, friendly, and powerful. They have to be clean, because voters hate bribery most.
2. The correct expression here is "influence on".
3. The possessive adjective "their" has been added to clarify to whose own lives you are referring.
4. You are referring to more than one life and so should use the plural "lives".
5. "It's not important political party relatively" is a little awkward, unclear and ungrammatical here and so has been changed to "The political party is relatively unimportant" to convey your intended meaning more clearly, naturally and grammatically correctly.
6. In your original wording, there should not have been a space before the comma. However, the comma has been changed to a semicolon to separate the closely related independent clauses either side and to remedy the comma splice in your original wording.
7. As you are referring to the abilities of specific candidates, you need the definite article "the" here.
8. Please note the correct spelling of the plural possessive "candidates'".
9. You are referring to more than one ability and so should use the plural "abilities".
10. There should not be a space before the comma.
11. The present simple "live" has been changed to the present perfect "have lived". The present perfect tense is used to decribe an action in the past that continues to have relevance in the present, which is what we have here.
12. As at 10 above.
13. The conjunction "and" has been added to join the second and third items in a list of three.
14. As at 10 above.
15. As you are referrinig to the marketing an PR skills of specific candidates, you need the definite article "the" here.
16. As at 8 above.
17. The noun "ability" has been changed to "skills" for a more natural expression of this idea. You are referring to more than one skill and so should use the plural "skills".
18. The word "some" has been changed to the conjunction "so" to introduce the reason and to remedy the comma splice in your original wording.
19. The word "candidates" has been changed to "they" to avoid unnecessary repetition. This enhances flow.
20. As you are referring to a non-specific good impression, you need the indefinite article "a" here.
21. The correct expression here is "impression on".
22. As you are referring specifically to the voters at the elections you are discussing, you need the definite article "the" here.
23. The pronoun "They" is ambiguous here as is could refer either to the candidates or the voters mentioned in the previous sentence. It has therefore been changed to "The candidates" to eliminate the ambiguity.
24. The noun "expression" has been changed to the verb "show" to convey your intended meaning grammatically correctly.
25. The conjunction "that" has been added before the subordinate clause for better sentence structure.
26. As at 10 above.
27. As at 10 above.
28. You can choose either to use the Oxford comma or not to use it. However, having made your choice, you must apply it consistently. As you used the Oxford comma in the second sentence in this box, one has been added here for consistency.
29. The word "be" has been added to provide the missing verb.
30. As at 10 above.
31. The word "because" has been added to remedy the comma splice in your original wording.
32. The words "most hate bribe" have been changed to "hate bribery most" to convey your intended meaning more clearly, naturally and grammatically correctly.
In my opinion , candidates how understand their election district is hardest. Some candidates have never live in there or work in there and they don't understand voters life , district problem ,demand at all.
In my opinion, it's hardest for candidates to demonstrate that they understand their election districts . Some candidates have never lived or worked there, and they don't understand the voters' lives, the district's problems, or their demands at all.
2. The words "it's hardest for" have been added before "candidates" to correlate more closely with the question to which you are responding. This enhances flow.
3. The infinitive "to demonstrate" have been added to correlate more closely with the question to which you are responding. This enhances flow.
4. The correct expression here is "demonstrate that"
5. The pronoun "they" has been added to provide the missing subject before "understand".
6. You are referring to more than one election district and so should use the plural "districts".
7. The change at 2 above renders the words "is hardest" redundant here. They have therefore been removed.
8. The correct present perfect form is "have never lived".
9. The preposition "in" is redundant here and so has been removed.
10. The first of two instances of the word "there" in this sentence has been removed to avoid unnecessary repetition. This enhances flow.
11. The correct present perfect form is "(have never) worked".
12. As at 9 above.
13. A comma has been inserted to separate the independent clauses either side joined by "and".
14. As you are referring specifically to the lives of the voters being discussed, you need the definite article "the" here.
15. As you are referring to the lives of the voters, you need the plural possessive "voters'" here.
16. You are referring to more than one life and so should use the plural "lives".
17. There should not be a space before the comma.
18. As you are referring specifically to the problems of the district being discussed, you need the definite article "the" here.
19. As you are referring to the problems of the district, you need the singular possessive "district's" here.
20. You are referring to more than one problem and so should use the plural "problems".
21. There should be a space after, not before, the comma.
22. The conjunction "or" has been added between the second and third items in the list of three for grammatical correctness.
23. The possessive adjective "their" has been added to clarify to whose demands you are referring.
24. You are referring to more than one demand and so should use the plural "demands".
I think voters will watch candidates's campaign pledge. We can know candidates emphasize what regions and their directions.
I think voters will look at candidates' campaign pledges. We can see which regions candidates emphasize and which directions they are proposing to take.
2. Please note the correct spelling of the plural possessive "candidates'".
3. You are referring to more than one pledge and so should use the plural "pledges".
4. The wording of your final sentence is a little awkward, unclear and ungrammatical. It has therefore been changed to "We can see which regions candidates emphasize and which directions they are proposing to take" to convey you intende meaning more clearly, naturally and grammatically correctly.
関連単語
- government（政府、政治）
- governor（州知事）
- mayor（市長、町長）
- resignation（辞任）
- election（選挙）
関連フレーズ
- Who do you think our next mayor will be?（次の州知事は誰になると思いますか。）
- Do you think he will raise our taxes again?（あなたは彼がまた税金を上げると思いますか。）
- Are you satisfied with our new governor?（あなたは新しい州知事に満足していますか。）
- When are we having the next election?（次の選挙はいつですか？）
- I can't trust the government anymore.（もう政府のことが信頼できません。）
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2. The indefinite article "a" can only be used with singular countable nouns. As "elections" is a plural noun, "a" has been removed for grammatical correctness.
3. The present simple "It's" has been changed to the future simple "It will be" for consistency of tense usage.
4. The noun "contest" is more appropriate than "match" here.
5. There should be a space after the full stop.
6. Please note the correct spelling of "Because".
7. The adjective "politic" means wise, sensible and practical; whereas "political" means relating to politics and so is the appropriate word here.
8. The conjunction "so" is redundant here and so has been removed.
9. The present participle "gathering" has been changed to the present simple "gather" as you are describing a habitual action.
10. There should not be a space before the comma.
11. The conjunction "and" has been added to join the independent clauses either side and remedy the comma splice in your original wording.
12. The correct expression here is "interest in".
13. A typing error has been corrected.
14. The words "the election event people looking like so excited" are a little awkward, unclear and ungrammatical here and so have been changed to "people look so excited at election events" to convey your intended meaning more clearly, naturally and grammatically correctly.
15. Please note the correct spelling of "Southern".
16. The words "stable relatively" have been reordered to "relatively stable" to reflect the normal English adverb placement rules.
17. As at 10 above.
18. Please note the correct spelling of "northern".
19. The words "will have" have been changed to "is likely to see" to indicate probability rather than certainty.
20. You are referring to more than one change and so should use the plural "changes".
21. The correct expression here is "For at least".
22. As at 10 above.
23. The word "also" is redundant here and so has been removed.
24. The pronoun "we" has been added to provide the subject missing from the clause.
25. The future simple "will be" has been added to provide the verb missing from the clause.
26. The word "most" has been changed to "a very" for a more natural expression of this idea.