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I'd like to talk about how I spend the time of 30's. The ten years is really crucial for my work and private life. It means that I suppose to encounter new opportunities such as transferring to another places from now on or increasing my family members, and so forth.I'd like to talk about how I spend the time of 30's. The ten years is really crucial for my work and private life. It means that I suppose to encounter new opportunities such as transferring to another places from now on or increasing my family members, and so forth.

自然な表現

I'd like to talk about how I spend my time in my 30's. The ten years are really crucial for my work and private life. It means that I expect to encounter new opportunities such as transferring to other places from now on, expanding my family, and so forth.    

1. "the time of 30's" is unclear. Perhaps " my time in my 30's" would convey what you intended to express.
2. We must use singular verbs with singular subjects and plural verbs with plural subjects. If a subject is singular (for example, "cat"), the verb must be singular too (for example, "plays"), and if a subject is plural, the verb must be plural too (cars have; people go). Subject-verb agreement refers to the agreement or harmony between the subject (the person, thing, or concept that performs the action) and the verb (the action or state of being) in a sentence. It means that the form of the verb must match the form of the subject in terms of number and person. Remembering and applying subject-verb agreement rules helps ensure that sentences are grammatically correct and sound natural.
3. "suppose" doesn't seem suitable here. The context suggests we could use "expect" here.
4. We should not use the article "an" with plural nouns, so we need "other" instead of "another" (an+other) here.
5. We need a comma here because "and so forth" was used at the end.
6. The meaning of "increasing my family members" doesn't fit here. We could use "expanding my family" in this context.
7. This text seems to be identical to the previous paragraph, so it was omitted.
That’s a thoughtful topic! Your 30s are definitely a time of big changes and opportunities. Then how do you plan to balance your work and personal life during this decade?

Actually, I have a one-year-old son and will have the second baby in this October. Therefore, it is a little bit challenging to work abroad from just now. I'm not sure when is the best timing to go, and where to work is out of my control, which means that it's due of our human resource department. However, in my company, as I get older, it get less opportunities to let me challenge where I want to work. That's one of the difficulties of my prioritization.

自然な表現

Actually, I have a one-year-old son and will have the second baby    this October. Therefore, it is a little bit challenging to work abroad right now. I'm not sure when the best timing to go is, and where to work is out of my control, which means that it's up to our human resources department. However, in my company, as I get older, it get fewer opportunities to let me choose where I want to work. That's one of the difficulties of my prioritization.

1. "in" is not required with the adverbial phrase "this October".
2. "from just now" is unclear here. Perhaps "right now" would convey what you intended to express.
3. This is a statement, not a question, so the verb "is" should be placed after the subject.
4. "Due of" is not usually used. We could use "it's up to" in this context.
5. We use the plural "resources" here when referring to the HR department.
6. We use "fewer" with plural nouns. "Less" is used with uncountable nouns.
7. "Challenge" is not usually used in this context. We could use "choose" here.
It sounds like you have a lot to consider with family and career opportunities. How do you usually decide which opportunities are worth pursuing despite the challenges? Do you discuss these decisions with your spouse or family before deciding?

Yes, I have already talked about my desires with my spouse. If I were to transfer to foreign branches, we need to decide whether we should live in the country with them or alone. My wife is also worker, and willing to continue her work, but she have no choice but quit her work, if we move to foreign countries. Also, we are not sure whether there are enough educational facilities such as kindergartens that foreigners can go. Taking into account these elements, I should decide where to work.

自然な表現

Yes, I have already talked about my desires with my spouse. If I were to transfer to foreign branches, we need to decide whether we should live in the country together or if I should go alone. My wife is also a worker, and willing to continue her work, but she has no choice but to quit her work, if we move to foreign countries. Also, we are not sure whether there are enough educational facilities such as kindergartens where foreigners can go. Taking into account these elements, I should decide where to work.

1. "we need to decide whether we should live in the country with them or alone" is unclear here. More specifically, what "with them or alone" refers to is not clear. Perhaps "together or if I should go alone" would convey what you intended to express.
2. "worker" is a singular and countable noun, so we should use an article before it.
3. We must use singular verbs with singular subjects and plural verbs with plural subjects. If a subject is singular (for example, "cat"), the verb must be singular too (for example, "plays"), and if a subject is plural, the verb must be plural too (cars have; people go). Subject-verb agreement refers to the agreement or harmony between the subject (the person, thing, or concept that performs the action) and the verb (the action or state of being) in a sentence. It means that the form of the verb must match the form of the subject in terms of number and person. Remembering and applying subject-verb agreement rules helps ensure that sentences are grammatically correct and sound natural.
4. The preposition 'to' is required here. We commonly use the structure 'to have no choice but to do something'.
5. We usually use "where" to present clauses about places in which something happens.
6. You expressed yourself well here. There is nothing to correct, so this is an alternative expression we could use in this context - "Considering these aspects".
  • manage to do~(なんとか~する)
  • listen to~(~を聞く)
  • to some degree(ある程度は)
  • a little bit(ちょっとだけ)
  • a pronunciation lesson(発音の授業)
  • a speaking lesson(会話の授業)
  • keep a diary(日記をつける)
  • I have been listening to the news in English on BBC for three months.(3ヶ月前からBBCの英語のニュースを聞いています。)
  • I can speak English to some degree if I speak slowly.(ゆっくり話せば、ある程度の英語は話せます。)
  • I have been studying English for almost 6 years.(6年間英語を勉強しています。)
  • People can't continue doing something for a long period without relaxing and having fun.(人は何かをするときには、リラックスしたり楽しんだりしないと、長く続けることはできません。)
  • I started studying English again last October.(私は10月からまた英語の勉強を始めました。)
  • I've been taking online lessons for more than nine months.(私は9ヶ月以上オンラインでの授業を受けています。)
  • I've been writing a diary in English for ten months now.(私は10ヶ月間英語で日記を書いています。)

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