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I attend a dental health lecture by a dentist and nutritionist. It was about oral frail. At first, the dentist introduced the oral exercises for senior. However, he said that everybody couldn't follow them, and the most important thing was to interact with others. Chatting and laughing with friends is the most effective for deteriorating mouth muscle.
I attended a dental health lecture by a dentist and nutritionist. It was about oral frailty. At first, the dentist introduced oral exercises for seniors. However, he said that not everybody could follow them, and the most important thing was to interact with others. Chatting and laughing with friends is the most effective for preventing deteriorating mouth muscles.
I have heard that people avoided laughing because it increases facial wrinkles. I thought laughing is good for increasing immune system. When people speak, they use oral muscles a lot, so it avoids deteriorating oral muscles.
I have heard that people avoided laughing because it increases facial wrinkles. I thought laughing was good for boosting the immune system. When people speak, they use oral muscles a lot, so it prevents deteriorating oral muscles.
Compared to the pandemic period, people interact with others and do more active. However, people have trouble anything else. However, people try to enjoy their lives. Back to stories about wrinkles, I think lashing wrinkles are not dirty, and makes look them happy.
Compared to the pandemic period, people interact with others and are more active. However, people have trouble with other things. Still, people try to enjoy their lives. Back to the wrinkles, I think laughing wrinkles are not unnatractive, and make people look happy.
2. This is a more natural phrasing in this context.
3. Better to use 'still' here, using 'However' in two sentences in a row sounds repetitive.
4. 'stories' was removed since it doesn't fit here, it is used when talking about something interesting that happened, not when expressing an opinion, should use article instead.
5. Correct spelling.
6. Better word choice, 'dirty' means to not be clean, it is not used in this context.
7. This was rephrased to sound more idiomatic and grammatically correct in this context.
関連単語
- a farewell party（送別会）
- a welcome party（歓迎会）
- a former colleague（かつての同僚）
- presentation（発表、プレゼンテーション）
- club activities（部活）
- excursion（小旅行、遠足）
- ordinarily（いつものように）
関連フレーズ
- We had a farewell party.（送別会をした。）
- I went to the bar and had three beers.（パーに行ってビールを3杯飲んできたところよ。）
- I went for a drink with my former colleague.（かつての同僚と飲んできたんだよ。）
- I went to the gym and swam in the pool.（ジムで泳いで来たんですよ。）
- I felt better after going to the bar.（飲み屋に行ったら気分が晴れました。）
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Another expression: I participated in a
2. Should use noun form here.
3. Article is not needed since you didn't specify which oral exercises they were.
4. Should use plural form to refer to adults in general.
5. This is a more natural phrasing in this context.
6. This was added for better clarity.
7. Should use plural form since there are multiple muscles.