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今日あったことについて話してみよう

Talking about your day
今日の出来事を話してみましょう。
今日はどのようなことがありましたか？印象に残っている出来事を話してみましょう。
How was your day today?
 
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How was your day today?

There's a junior colleague in the same audit department who often works with me, and I made a restaurant reservation for the two of us to have drinks. I plan to bring the wine I bought during our business trip to New York together and drink it at that restaurant.

自然な表現

There's a junior colleague in the same audit department who often works with me, and I made a restaurant reservation for the two of us to have drinks. I plan to bring the wine I bought during our business trip to New York    and drink it at that restaurant.

1. Removed this word as it is unnecessary.
What a lovely idea. What type of wine did you buy in New York? Does your friend know of your plan, or will the restarant reservation and wine be a surprise? Does the restaurant charge you to drink your own wine on its premises? If so, how much?

The wine is a white Albarino grape variety from a vineyard in Long Island, NY. I told her I had made a restaurant reservation and was planning to bring the wine. I gave her a birthday present in December, and since it was my birthday in January, she gave me a birthday present in return. I felt bad for her to give me a gift in return, so I suggested we drink the wine I bought on a business trip to New York, since she couldn't buy wine on the trip. The wine corkage fee is 2,000 yen per bottle.

自然な表現

The wine is a white Albarino grape variety from a vineyard in Long Island, New York. I told her I had made a restaurant reservation and was planning to bring the wine. I gave her a birthday present in December, and since it was my birthday in January, she gave me a birthday present in return. I felt bad for her giving me a gift in return, so I suggested we drink the wine I bought on a business trip to New York, since she couldn't buy wine on the trip. The wine corkage fee is 2,000 yen per bottle.

1. It is best to write this place's name in full for better clarity and consistency.
2. It is best to express the verb as its present participle in this context.
I see. That is a high fee for sure. Is it a Japanese restaurant where you plan to go? Wishing you a belated happy birthday.

I think 2000 yen is a reasonable price. Restaurants usually sell alcoholic beverages at two or three times the purchase price. The restaurant is a Spanish restaurant. Thank you for your congratulatory message!

自然な表現

I think 2,000 yen is a reasonable price. Restaurants usually sell alcoholic beverages at two or three times the purchase price. The restaurant is a Spanish restaurant. Thank you for your congratulatory message!

1. A comma is needed to separate the thousands digits.
2. You can also phrase it like this: "charge two to three times the retail price for alcoholic beverages."

関連単語

  • a farewell party（送別会）
  • a welcome party（歓迎会）
  • a former colleague（かつての同僚）
  • presentation（発表、プレゼンテーション）
  • club activities（部活）
  • excursion（小旅行、遠足）
  • ordinarily（いつものように）

関連フレーズ

  • We had a farewell party.（送別会をした。）
  • I went to the bar and had three beers.（パーに行ってビールを3杯飲んできたところよ。）
  • I went for a drink with my former colleague.（かつての同僚と飲んできたんだよ。）
  • I went to the gym and swam in the pool.（ジムで泳いで来たんですよ。）
  • I felt better after going to the bar.（飲み屋に行ったら気分が晴れました。）

こんな方にオススメ

  • 日常
  • 初級
  • 自己紹介
  • 最近の出来事